why did you have to say the gang's race... it wasn't necessary

I like how Squee was the one to end Ned's life, it showed how much he was willing to protect Rose.

It's interesting that all of these women are like Xiao, reminds me of a reincarnation type of thing.

I enjoyed this chapter like always.

Oh my gosh XD Was that really a JTHM and DC comics crossover? This chapter was really funny to me (the Nny and Squee part that is)

I think your writing is pretty easy to follow, I don't have really any problems. I love the cliffhanger.

Love the fact that the thing behind that wall has escaped, very interesting.

OMG this is brilliant! I love it, I think you've paced this story out pretty well so this chapter was well diserved.

I love the painting at the end! It's awesome! I also love how Rose bought that jacket for Nny.

That's a little different, that Rose was bullied. It makes sense too.

A good filler chapter, it was necessary and not boring in my opinion.

I love this, how Rosie was willing to pay for Nny's operation.

Squee is so cute, it makes me happy that he has Rosie to take care of him.

Ahh, this is pretty good! I like how Rosie is Squee's babysitter, that's a good idea and I haven't seen it used before in this fandom. I also like how you portrayed Nny in this chapter too.

You made me cry! Tears of happiness and a little sad that this is over! You know how often I find fiction that does this? Especially in this fandom! My GODS I LOVE YOU(in that friendly kinda way)!

I...just can't express with words how much I love this! Have you're own GIR and...A MOUNTAINOUS BAG OF SWEETS!*crazy lovable defect robot and sweets sent*

XD

Shadow