Super sweet. Super sad. Super in-character.

I loved it :-)

acute.

Beautiful

That was Awesome, you portrayed the emotions perfectly!

TT *crying*

It was.. So.. TT

Artemis! Wow! So beautiful!

You did it perfectly! Now i must find more of your writing!

My eyes actually became wet at the end O:

keep writing!

How old are the kids? Six-ish? I think you need to dumb them down a bit. Kids that young arent spiteful, really. It's kinda deamonising them. They might laugh at him and not want to play with him cause he's awkward, but they wouldn't spite him like that. theif's a bit... Yeah, a bit adult. Something like 'his daddy steals stuff' might be better. I dunno, I'm going off my little brother, who's nearly five, but very acedemic.

But this was good, goes in ma faves! Can you continue it a bit? Maybe please?

Love it!

Poor Arty.

Weep. That's so sad..AWWW

AWWW so sad for arty

ouch. kids are cruel. but such is life.

very nicely done.

This was really, really well written and totally seems like that could be what caused Arty's... personality traits.

Great writing!

~Nyita7

This was excellently portrayed and paced. Artemis- even at seven years old- was perfectly in character, and the dialouge was engaging. Kudos. :) Keep at it!

OMG! i love this fic! GREAT JOB! i rally like how you described freindship and how you made artemis come to that conclusion

poor arty! dang backstabbers and all in the school! Wow, Arty in second grade? Dang, considering his speech, i suspected this was present day! lol, should've mentioned that a little earlier. Unless you did, and i missed it...Dang Joe

This was an amazing story... Very sad and did tug a few heart strings. But I can actually see this happening to Artemis. You've captured his character perfectly.