Ahhhhhhh! I freaking loved this and there is a little bit of hate mixed in but mainly love. Ugh so good. When it all went down I was on the bus headed home from work and I swore up a storm, the creepy guy next to me moved so that was a plus. Damn just rip my heart out there why don’t ya. Excellent job.

Ugh! Fuck. With every chapter it’s like a push pull. One I love the next makes me hate it all then I love it again. I’m really glad I don’t have to wait for updates because I would be even more upset right now. Ugh!

Ok back to the beautiful torture you have written.

I honestly have no idea where you are taking this story. I’m having a major love-hate relationship with this, it’s not even funny. I can tell by the end I’m either going to be blown away with love or loathing.

All I wanted was a good and happy KiGo story :(.
It was very good writing and all but Im really angry honestly that you had this ending. But best of luck to future writings!

Wow, that was a journey. Loved it, though the ending left a bad taste in my mouth. I've been spoiled with happily every after endings. It was refreshing.

Thank you for an amazing ready and best regards,
Prince.

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this shit got super fucking weird

Well, completely hooked on this story; thank you for the lost chapter! Not sure what was going on back when this was originally written, but there is a rather large amount of rather explicit stories posted now. That isn't a complaint, fyi, thoroughly enjoying this.

I love this please write another story

. .MUCH!
It took me a long time to finish this cause I started to get lazy around the fluff chapter, but was determined to finish it since it was an amazing story, and what a great decision it was! I think you introduced me the KIGO pairing, and I'm so happy for that. You were able to pull my heartstrings even from the relationship Shego and Fong had, and normally I hate the pairings that aren't the ones I like, even if they're ended.
But that ending...I hate you so much for it! I was expecting at any moment for Shego to revive or something! Why did you have to go and make me sad! Poor Kim and Shego! After going through so much!
Anyways...after that ranting. I just want to say again that I loved your work. It was amazing, the writing was just perfect, the way you developed the characters, the setting, I loved it very much, even though this was from 2005. I already saw you have something like a sequel to this, so now I'm going to it! :P

I'll say when you're editing this work you need to work on the Pinyin "Wo bu zhidao" "pengyou" . And also "Ta de toufa shi hongse de." That's it. I love the story so far.

Heh, feels like an interesting window into another culture. Marrying for the greater good of the community? So, so very alien to Westerners. Ugh. Sorry but obligation to your family, to your community, to your (long dead and gone) ancestors... haha I guess I'm glad I'm not part of that society. I'm much too self involved XD. Paying taxes is a far as I'm willing to be forced.

Good story, really. Not perfect but that doestn matter. I enjoy this. Hmm can't wait to find out more about this mysterious purpose that Shego is training Kim for. I know this story has been out in forever but I still think you deserve some reviews, it IS a good story even years later :D

Well this Shego is a little rough no? And a little kinky with the hairpulling lolz

That was a neat way to get Kim to stay 'willingly' by winning that match, that was a nice touch. I still expect her to rebel but now in her own mind at least she's there of her own free will... mostly-kinda-maybe(?) at any rate.

I guess you're going for the whole Shego is the myserious/sexy/badass/antihero route. Its cool. Totally dig it. Pretty good story so far :D

Well... Imma have to do some suspencsion of disbelief, what with Kim seemingly just accepting becoming a servant/pack mule for three years cuz she lost a bet. Maybe she'll realistically try to get out of it later? I mean she has family, responsibilities, etc...

Hehe China.. I can't help but think they're going to learn from the Chinese Amazons and hilariously get cursed at Jusenkyo. That would be cool. :D

This was a great fic, I'm a huge fan of fics where talented writers combine and revamp universes. Reading this work has made me wonder through your works list and I eagerly await the start of your next fic. I have to ask what with the ending, will we be lucky enough to see a sequel?