| Reviews for A New Chance |
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   Neo-Devil chapter 2 . 7/6/2014 I am SO going to enjoy this, Welcome to Hell pink Toad bitch (Umbridge) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2014 Dude you are Aware a Low S Class Human or Demon can destroy the Earth |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/28/2013 You need to update your stories. |
| John Connolly chapter 4 . 8/12/2012 Wait when did Botan get here? There is no mention of her until the end of this chapter... |
| reamane21 chapter 4 . 7/24/2012 this is funny i trying not to laugh so loud because my little brother is sleep but it is hard i do hope this will not be on hatius for long it is really good. |
| Uchiha Bara chapter 4 . 6/27/2012 Awesome chapter! This fic is so exciting! I love it |
| Uchiha Bara chapter 3 . 6/27/2012 Interesting chapter :) |
| Uchiha Bara chapter 2 . 6/27/2012 Awesome chapter :) i LOVED the sorting hats reaction! That was awesome |
| Uchiha Bara chapter 1 . 6/27/2012 This is very interesting I like it a lot :) |
| ChopSuzi chapter 4 . 6/22/2012 Dang, Yusuke. I knew you were a bad- ss, but this is a whole new level! ;D |
| arcadiac chapter 4 . 12/17/2009 Here's a little review from me: First off, your spelling and grammer are good, still a little far from outstanding, but good. Fine. However, the events that happen in the story are a little confusing, and seem to only be there to accentuate how awesomely godlike the yyh characters' (namely Yuusuke) powers, possessions, or abilities are. Remember, a story becomes less enjoyable if our favorite canon characters are becoming Mary, or Gary-Stues, totally overwhelming the plotline. It seems to scream, No conflicts for them! They can HANDLE it, 'cause they're awesome. Yes, we know. Also, I love Yuusuke here, but he's a little overwhelming. Where's the adorable, hilarious spirit-detective we all know and love? I know he went threw all this training to become so godlike powerful, but there were many times in the series where that didn't stop him from losing his cheefulness. OOC Thanks! |
| yokokuramayoko chapter 4 . 10/21/2009 WHAT NO PLEASE PLEASE update soon this is one of the best yyhhp crossovers I have ever read! |
| darkryubaby chapter 4 . 5/10/2009 kinda sorry if this sounds...rude, but that contest is dumb. own a character of yours? who's that desperate? sorry. |
| darkryubaby chapter 3 . 5/10/2009 your the type of author that reveal to much info to fast. keep doing it and there will be no real mystery left and the story will end up sucking. |
| Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 4 . 4/11/2009 great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. Why is this under Harry & Yusuke? |
