Lovely story!And I like your Caroline a lot.

Wow! great story, very sophisticated portrayal of Caroline, Bill and Laura. Great story but... I am an angst lover so I would have loved to see Laura decide to let Bill go back to Caroline and then they meet up again on Galactica. lol. that would have been fun to see. Great Story! going in my favourites!

p.s

I thought Adama's wife was named Carolanne...

That was really great.

An in-depth, sophisphicated story that described the personalities of Will and Laura pefecty. Very well written.

It was good and everything. but I wish that somehow he end up leaving Laura so it could work with the timeline and so they they could meet on Galactica again

the story was a very beautiful story and a good ending. I am so glad Roslin and caroline didnt lose thier friendship. Nicley up the god work! I really like this story!