| Reviews for Chess, Chips and Flowergirls |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 5/17 Why would you do this? I mean it is inevitable and its a miracle they surived at all in the anime but this could have been them. and I LOVE them with my entire being. Snd how dare choji, the kind hearted boy is the one to go first. and then how cruel is it that Shikamaru has to watch her go? Before realizing, afraid that its his time to go as well. IT''s so sad and cruel and so hurtufl. Like this hurt me so miucch i don't have words |
 AriMarshmellow chapter 1 . 1/15/2019 Im not sure why i thought reading more of ir stories was a wonderful ideas because REALLY i dont think i thought this through. U have the ability to make me weep in a few lines and damn are u good. |
| Poodie chapter 1 . 1/31/2018 This made me cry XD It is so beautiful in its own scary angsty way XD Loved it! ~Poodie |
| Kris Senju chapter 1 . 8/22/2016 I don't know why this doesn't make me want to cry more but it does. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2016 Beautifully tragic! |
| arlene56 chapter 1 . 8/9/2015 This was sad, beautifully written, and very touching. |
| Jashl Xxify chapter 1 . 1/22/2015 Well Shit. I want more details now. |
| Jade23 chapter 1 . 12/22/2013 That was so touching. The line that said, "Choji saw chips, Ino saw a unicorn, and Shikamaru saw death," reall6 hit home for me. |
| PuddlePops chapter 1 . 11/23/2013 Perfect. Jus perfect and sad and awful, but still perfect. |
| moon strut chapter 1 . 8/2/2013 HOLY- TEAM TEN ANGST. KILL ME. OMFG. this is just EVIL. |
| Yukino-chan chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 shit! now I feel like tearing up... |
| 54rt0r1u5 chapter 1 . 3/25/2013 right cool and all but do you realize that Kaze no Hi means wind of fire i think you meant Hi no Kuni land of fire just saying otherwise pretty good |
| dandeliondreams chapter 1 . 1/12/2013 My favorite line. "She thinks, well, Chouji's just a little overweight, and Shikamaru just knows how to appreciate the finer things in life, and she makes a mental note to kick the ass of anyone who disagrees with her." Thank you for writing. |
| Mooky-aron chapter 1 . 10/17/2012 I love the mentions of the Fates in between all the scene! it really fits in well! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2012 I know nothing about the Greek mythology references, but I thought the subtle references were very clever anyway! I'm a little unsure as to whether Shikamaru killed himself at home having survived, or killed himself in the field, though that may be because I'm not reading properly... I dislike angst because well executed angsty fics make me cry like there's no tomorrow. Like this. |
