Even though you only finished three chapters, this was such an enjoyable read. If you ever decide to come back to it, I will gladly read it. Thanks for sharing!

I'm getting a bit redundant, reviewing all your stories, but once again, good job. Well-written. Poignant. Heart-wrenching.

I just wanted to say that this is an amazing fanfic, and that it's way to bad that you stopped writing. It really is fantastic. Great job on the three chapters you graced the site with.

~MJ

sorry, I'm gonna bug you for a sec just to beg you to update this if you are still working on it. Let me know, thanks

cure me from my milo/alexis break up depression.

I think its cool that Jess feels in for someone at meijers. Thats funny! Keep up your work!

Update soon and I'll give you a proverbial cookie.

After a 6 month break from fanfiction I am now a complete fangirl again. Oh dear.

I've had this strange Literati craving all week (which is strange because I was so totally pro-R/L), and tried looking for some reading... and then got discouraged when I saw all the crap out there... and then got really excited when I read yours... then sort of fell in love with yours... and I am rambling... but I think my sanity will sort of depend on you updating now, because this is a gorgeous fic. I love the fact that they went to the laundromats when other people would have written about them doing something conventional- the emptiness of the laundromat was the perfect place for their tension to resume and for issues to get resolved. And needless to say, the lines about never forgiving were lovely. Lovely and saddening and wonderful.

So now I must entreat you to PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :(

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great story! Loving it, update soon.

A month away from fanfic was a good idea. I realized that I have not fallen out of love with the pairing but have fallen out of love a bit of the situation. It's over, isn't it? It's painful though. And I'm thanking you for writing this fic. For opening doors again. Because a month later (over a year later) I am still reading this hoping these two kids get together in the end. (It's okay if they don't, I'll surely love the ride.) That's gotta be believing, doesn't it?

Thank you for making these characters stay alive.

i agree with everyone who review this story...you are a great writer...and please update soon?

i think is good, as all your fics, i know all people say the same thing, but is the truth..your fics are really great, but this one..i must say is one of my favorites...im begin you for an update...please?

the title is so perfect for the story...all is so opposite of logic..)

keep writing cause youre great at it..-

thats all ..

I really like it. I'd like to see more conflict before it gets fluffy, though that's just my opinion. It's up to you. Very good writing, keep it up.

I like how you have them meeting in New York. And I cant wait to see how they meet up again. I really dont like her roommate, for the record. But I think see works well in the story.