| Reviews for Bokura no Kokoro De |
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suchrandomness chapter 4 . 9/12/2012 It's probably a moot anyway - but I so hope that you eventually continue this :) |
Trees of leaves chapter 4 . 2/24/2012 This is really interesting! I'd hate to never see it updated again :( it'd leave a sadness in me... ;_; a beautiful fic never finished. I do hope you'll eventually come back to us! It's interesting how Fuji is here; so he's unconsciously suppressing his talents? Is it due to Yuuta? D: Tell us more, and how it's affecting his relationship with Tezuka...! 3 They're all really cute as first-years, despite being in high school rather than junior high _~ In the first chapter, I think you said elementary when talking about middle school/junior high; is it from there that they do not have friends coming? Please, please, please update! *offers chocolate* |
yume229 chapter 4 . 1/8/2011 this fic is nice! Too bad you haven'y updated for so long... I hope you would.. :D |
fuji-addict chapter 4 . 4/12/2007 Mou, it's such a shame if you're not going to continue this...This is one of the kinds of story I am looking for here in the PoT fandom...I really wish you could continue this... |
i-see-faeries chapter 4 . 1/20/2007 Aw, this is really nice, if not just a little inaccurate. The slowness makes the story more believeable. I wish you would update. |
Triple Soul chapter 4 . 5/3/2006 ... is it over...? Why don't you update anymore? It's a sugoi ficcie! I really really hope you continue! |
Fuji and Eiji's Girl chapter 4 . 4/7/2006 It's really good! Keep it up! I hope ya update soon! Later! ~Fuji and Eiji's Girl |
Autumn Ice chapter 2 . 1/7/2006 I think you have a good start for a story. You've given a lot of background on the characters, especially the changes, which is nice to see. The interactions between the first years is cute, and Yamato is always fun to read about. One thing though (and this is just my personal opinion): your use of Japanese. I find it distracting to read a story with random foreign words thrown in, especially when there are English equivalents; it tends to detract from the overall story, because you aren't writing in Japanese, so why are you adding in Japanese dialogue? Also, middle school is read as "chugakkou", not "chuugaku"; similarily, elementary school is "shougakkou". Tournament is "taikai". And "rei" is literally "bow". |
Night Cross chapter 4 . 12/10/2005 i think this story is so cool! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep it up! |
Fightingdreamer5 chapter 4 . 12/9/2005 Its really good! Your not going to end it there are you? Update soon! |
badluck-ngprod chapter 4 . 8/21/2005 Good story. Good characterization. Will be insteresting how you continue to develop the story. More... More... More... |
Kooriyoukai chapter 4 . 7/26/2005 This story is quite amazing, and so far for four chapters I've been stunned by the flawless characterizations and the alternative perspective being taken on this particular group. You've done an excellent job giving everyone their respective time "on screen" and I've been enjoying the slight mystery surrounding Fuji, but most of all I feel like I'm finally seeing the series I wanted to see all along in Prince of Tennis, a story about the original, 3rd year regulars and their climb to greatness, instead of Ryoma's story starting as a first year. Your blend of Japanese has been enjoyable too, unlike many other stories I've read where the usage has been done in ignorance or to just sound cool, so I applaud you on applying it so well throughout the story. I look forward to seeing more, and how everyone's relationships develop and grow, so this is definitely going on my favorites list :) |
konnistique chapter 4 . 7/22/2005 poor Tezzie-bear.. XD wait scatch that, poor freshmen! / good chapter even though this happens to be a very late review... Nyahahaha... D |
yamatoforever chapter 4 . 7/21/2005 How could Fuji be so ignorant about his own ability? That he is a tensai? It's so sad that everyone misunderstood him. And Tezuka even gave him a cold shoulder. I think Tezuka would say something harsh when Fuji would try to help in clean-duty. Please post the next chapter quickly! Uhm, and I really want to know about what people says about Fuji outside he was a tensai. |
harukaze chapter 4 . 7/19/2005 well this fic is going along nicely.. they're not ooc and eveything in the fic seems perfect.. great job. i'm really enjoying this.. so plz..update whenever u can. here's to hoping for a quick one |