That last sentence did it. That's all I have to say. :'(

This was pretty awesome, but I have one thing:

No grammar/spelling issues, but second person/you based stories aren't allowed under the FFN Guidelines.

I assume this is about Leon. It would probably be best for you to say that, like:

Leon, you always did take yourself a little too seriously back then.

I guess what I'm saying is have 'I' refer to 'you' by name a couple of times.

Awesome job though. XD

-Omega

it's amazing how you pull off humor in a tradgedy.

wtflip. your awesome.

this was like, published a year ago.

and i review now, of all times. xD

it's so funny && sad- & just so YUFFIE.

faves.

mix of emotions.

how great!

O:

[freaksout] THIS IS. AWESOME.

i mean, it was so FUNNY. but the ending~

HOW TRAGIC. & the clue about yuffie mentioning

"you haven't changed at all" - GOSH.

that means he DIED. omgomgomg [freaksout][again]

& you ended it with a BANG! GAWD.

i still can't believe that between the laugh & everything...

there is a TRAGEDY. god. you ROCK. for sure. I love you.

nuff said.

this is an awesome work. WRITE MORE!

3 : FELIA.

Aww, so good. ;-; I worship you still ~

Interesting...she's talking to Leon isn't she? I wonder how he died.

But this was good, in a sad way.

lmao i'm stupid. at first i thought the first part before the "rewind" was a part of your author's note. that's pretty interesting how yuffie 'grieves' or whatever you want to call it. also interesting how squallyuffierinoa were all there like the same world. at least i think it's rinoa.

Quite a cryptic ending, I must say. Not to mention wonderfully done, like the rest of the story. I love the voice you gave her; it sounds very much like something she would say. Brilliant work.

i am . . . 3 months late.

damn.

oh i knew it!

while i was reading through this thing, i kept having this reoccuring image of yuffie reflecting back and talking to a dead leon.

but god i love your writing. lolz.

- lyphe

Amazingly brilliant. That was such an incrediable story. You definately have talent. Congratulations on writing a truely excellent fic, which will most likely become legendary in the Kingdom Hearts category.

Unbelievibly good.

Your portrayal of dialogue and settings are very nice, and your mood stays on key the whole fic

The flow of the story is great, and the fact that you were able to keep me in the dark about the ending is just a display of your natural writing talent.

As of now I'm going through most of your fics because I not only liked this story but I liked the writer. In fact I like the writer much more, and that is really where it counts.

Please keep writing, your skill deserves your attention, and your talent must be displayed.

How sad. Awesome beginning,awesome ending. *big grin while tears run down face* Wowish, conflicting emotions _ You did that realy well! I loved it! _ *wishes this was MSN so she could dothe thumbs up sign*

Oh loved the story it was a shocking ending, but very good. I don't know really how to explain it, but i loved the story alot for some reason. It should of have least got more reviews than this.

COOl story keep up with the good work

Peace!

It was so dam funny, until the tombstone! Well it was really good, shocked me with the ending. I hope you write more!