Loff. Pure, unadulterated loff. Brilliant dialogue, love the interaction and relationship between Izumo and Kotetsu (first non-yaoi with them I've ever seen, and friendship fic must be a lot harder than yaoi to write), and... Iruka. Aww. The poor man, really.

Amazing work.

I like how you pulled off the challenge. You portrayed each character well. The end part with Iruka was a bit of a surprise, but it was a good surprise. Write more soon.

*dies laughing*

Brilliant. xD

Hmm...I maybe be reading too much into this...but it looks like Iruka loved Kurenai. It's interesting how the clue blended in though.

Nicely done on the dare. Had me cracking up several times while reading it.

HA! The thought of Izumo and, uh... the other guy grading such tests! How can anyone as Iruka sensei get so freaking wasted... ah, man. Although it was a dare-fic, it's still fun. Cya!

Strange...very strange

another_jounin here-I love it! Your characterization is so great I can picture this perfectly! You've really done a great job showing Izumo and Kotetsu's friendship- and I love the fact that they were stuck grading Academy papers! And the Cardigan of Doom!- wow, that was priceless!:) And those two lines at the end... perhaps it's just the trademark of angst-loving writer, but I see potential for those lines to be read two ways...;) Good stuff!