You should do more of this one

I really like it a lot! **

Where they making a headache relief potion or the potion to cure boils as that is the potion that required you to take it off the fire before adding the Porcupine Quills.

interesting

please update

WOW - this certainly is different! I LOVE AU's with interesting storylines!

OMg lol this is horrible. i cant read anymore. It had some much potential to

great is this the ending because it says complete at the top

just letting you know the Room of Requirement is on the 7th floor not the 3rd

*Stasia

ok, I have been having some issues with this story. You have a great idea here don't get me wrong, but your flow needs work. Your transitions in the characters need to take some time, you need to slow down a little and work on character development. Xavier slid too easily into the role of a leader, his height it too tall for a 10 year old (even a tall 10 year old). And yes while some people come by the sword naturally, training and footwork need to always be learned.

Your ever watchful reader, Raksha Koneko-chan

omg omg i love it

I loved it, please write a sequel x

Slytherin indeed!

UPDATE THE STORY YOU SILLY COW

The story isn't bad so far, but there are some contradictions in this chapter that I suggest you correct :)
The most prominent one is when Harry/Xavier yells at Ron telling him that his name is Xavier Riddle and a few lines later, Xavier mentions that no one except a select few know his real name.