Reviews for Abandoned community
Queen Vampiress chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
oh shame! poor Jonas's he kind of deserved it. he was a bastard in the book after all. lol. this is the first ive seen of something like this. great job!
flamemaker666 chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
it doesn't really make any sense that he would start to have his own feelings only AFTER jonas left...but despite that it was written well. u should write another one.

-cece. ;)
almostinsane chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
Great story!
Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
Oh, I love this. I think that's really what his father would have thought.
Nastrond chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
thats so sad...
weartheseshorts chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
Wow, that was a really good short, short (really short) short story. You worded it real well and everything. Great job.

thats me

ahhelga

aka Pauline