Maybe this time Sev can actually admit he likes him back lol! I loved it!

very interesting

Oh God, you take things to a comletely different level.

The symbolism in this is just fantastic. Serverus - to sever. I never even clicked onto that.

There are alot of connections between names and objects that I stress are too brilliant for words. So just imagine me presenting you with a giant box of something you love.

TehOdd1 xoox

Hi! I just read the first part. I love it! My favorite thing is how you're keeping Severus in character. I'm about to read the sequel. I'm excited to see what happens next!

Carolyn

thats it?you don't tell how? oh well...

**hops up and down** going to go read the next one now!

yay i love it update soon please if you do i give you lot o cookies for to be eatin ty.

The end? No, I want more. This is not an end, it is a begining. Will Harry and his friends be all right?

It is a great story. As usual we can feel their emotion and you paint Severus as he is in the book, not as a hero but as a man with his fault and his qualities.

I'm happy you to read you.

Oh, glad to see you've posted it here... i love Severus in this fic, though he's always brooding about having to save Harry all the time, I believe that he doesn't mind doing it at all! :)

Amanda

Wow.

I love this, I want more chapters or sequels.

Keep up the excellent work. Coolsa.

hi,good story,bye

Interesting. :D Potter. Pointed object with two or more handles. Hehe, I love it.

I thought that this story was great, I must say you have quite some talent. I don't usually read Harry Potter fan fiction much, but this one surprised me. Your style of writing holds a lot of maturity, and good vocabulary, in which mosty stories I read on here have the vocabulary of a 3rd grader, anyway, great story, and keep on writing...

-Yumi-Code Lyoko