You ended it right before something that would have been an epic fight. Why do you do this to me?

Great job please continue

I dont get it. When youve lived the life he has or at least gone through a little bit of what he has. you do not come out to be an open person. He tells kakashi hes part demon... Smart. He keeps mentioning his brothers and sisters every five seconds. Smart. I mean its like his abiity to keep things secret from when he was in the academy completely disappeared. Narutos team are demanding he tell them everything.. Tell them to fuck off. Also, im suprised at the kyubbi... he seems to really try to get naruto to be part of the team? I would think that with the life he has lived he would do the opposite.

Honestly, I'm disgusted. This is literally a REHASH of a THOUSAND other SIMILAR fanfictions.

Tch. Can't find anything unique these days.

You made Naruto a genius, and barely changed anything. What's the point? You just made him OOC. (Which, I wouldn't have minded IF it lead to something, but noooo. Canon!rehash, and useless changes. Wow.)

So yeah. You took away his personality, gave him useless gifts, and everything's still the same. Useless.

LAME

i hope u update soon

What is he doing?
How will Sasuke going to handle having sense knocked into him?
Please continue this story.
I want more!

6 years rip

Ch 20 Tension to cut with a knife . And Not enough power/chance to Dearest Shukaku . Ideas ?Waking Hit but how ?Allergy bomb ? Get close and hit . Strong High Explosive ? It is no easy .

Please update.

You three make me laugh.
Speechless, you are an amazing writer. I absolutely love this story. Though I am relatively new to the Naruto fandom, Last Rebel will defintiky keep me in the fandom.
Ghostie and Nonsooth, never loose your senses of humor. Same goes to Speechless.

Why are the biju different from canon?

thus the author died and was never heard from ever again. THE END .

This story is great, and I can't wait for more. Take however long you need!

I hope life's not being too cruel and you're well. Just loyally coming back for a re-read years later and checking to see if you'd updated yet. Either way, still love the storyline and I wish you the best in your endeavors! :)
-Snea

I love this!
Please, please update soon!