I read most of the first chapters during my camping trip and I found that this story was really good and fun! Nice job! I like how you used Emerson to show how much Lily and James made more sense together. There were a couple of spelling mistakes here and there though. Apart from that, this story has totally caught my attention and I will read it until the end for sure!

what a great read. Legit spentmy entire day reading this one xx

hchubby

Last time you said its Lily Chrstine Evans

I enjoyed this story even though I've already read all seven HP books. Only wish you had then date the whole seventh year and shag at some point. Thanks for this story. Loved it.

Such an awesome fanfic...but cutting house elf's head in front of sirius was pretty harsh naa?

You have potrayed Lily as a character with no personality. I read uptil 7 chapters and the 'overbearing' and 'childish' form presented in the story had me quit. Sorry! But I would like to advice you to develop your characters a bit according at least to the canon. It's a fanfiction after all anf bot an Alternative one either.

Lovely story! A little more drama would have been nice...but the story was really good otherwise! Your language is very polished...I loved the fact that you didn't use any words like Omg or 'cos...they spoil the 1970's feel...

I had so much fun reading this, and now I'll be on to the sequel!

Thank you.

Dear Author,
I just wanted to say that this story was one of the best that i have read so far... You would be an amazing writer and i loved your story because i felt like i was actually reading from there point of views. This story was funny, romantic, and a tad exciting. That is why i liked it... I love stories like these that has those in it. So, in my opinion this is a J. K Rowling worthy book and if you showed this to her she would love it.I enjoyed reading this and i hope to read more stuff you write!

- Your biggest supporter
Melinda

Haha, Petunia listen's to Wizard's music.

Awwww! My birthday is december 29th! Poor lily having to have a dentist appointment then!

Great story so far!

Greenandhazel xx

i really like your story so far, its really well written and the plot seems like its heading in a REALLY great direction :) i just wanted to say that i don't think sirius should smoke...it kinda puts me off him and i usually LOVE sirius :D thats all but other than that i LOVE your story :P

Oh my gosh, I LOVE THIS STORY! This was one of the first things my sister read on here EVER when it was fist being posted. I've only just starte writing fanfiction and she showed it to me and told me I'd love it. She was so right. I don't even mind about the ways it goes from the books! Thank you for writing this!

I LOVED THIS FIC. IT WAS PERFECT. OTHER THAN THE USE OF LOOSE WHEN LOSE WAS NECESSARY AWESOME WRITING.