triste e lindo

Once again, OMG. Good fic. I'm sad that she left them, but his line cuts deep, and is so true, given the circumstances!

Keep writing!

Jenna

That was so sad, yet touching. Of course I had to be listening to a sad song while reading it...great writing :)

Aw, that was really sad... You caught the emotions well. I love Kathryn/Chakotay :) A needle in a universe - heh :) Your writing is beautiful.

(I'd just like to add, thanks for all the reviews you've given me... I kept meaning to update my fairy tale fics so I could say thank you :) but I've been writing rather of lot of HP fics ;) )

*sniff* I never read much J/C, but this fits with the way the relationship turned out on the show.

Again, the fic is short, but I really do like it. It's well written.

Ooh, nice stuff - I like the bittersweet at the end. And I especially like the point that she might never have known the real him. I've always thought that about her. If she'd only open her freakin' eyes & look at him, look at what he offers her, she would *know* it was okay!

Nicely done (and unfortunately all to believable). So sad!

I like your style of writing, very powerful, very capable of inspiring emotions. I'm curious as to what inspired you to write Chakotay as being so angry, perhaps there's something of yourself written into the charachter? Whatever way, I liked it.

wow. that's really good. i really, really liked it. i'm in an angsty mood right now and that was perfect... nice ending.

Oh, it's so tragic! The poor people... Great fic. *g* I do love my angst.

Aaaaaa! Too painful! Ten years? Why? What happened? Very good fic, obviously, or I wouldn't be spazzing out about it!

Saaaaaddd... But I liked it. Kick ass Chakotay, that's what we need!

Interesting but I would like to know more, a lot more. You have said just enough to really pique my imagination. thanks for sharing.

Sad and really good. The song really fits, too. Have you thought of writing more of the story?