I love reading this out loud to my sisters! Unfortunately, it's difficult to read Metal Sonic's part. :)

So funny! I appreciate your creativity! I laughed and laughed while reading this!

I LOVE IT!

Wow, this story was wrote in 05.

! GASP! ! GASP! PANT PANT! OMG! THAT WAS TOOOOOOOOO FUNNY! (wipes tears from eyes) You had me in hysterics! I LOVED the part about 'tails one and tails two! SOOOOO FUNNY! And of course the very valuable lesson at the end of the story...LOL! So cleverly rhymed! very enjoyable, hilariously funny! definite favourite!

Hahahahahahahah! that was so funny! You got me laughing so hard at "The hedgie with a wedgie" and tail one and tail two! It was so evil what you did to shadow, but funny for us, to watch "the ultimate lifeform" chuck a spaz. That was one of the best fanfics I've eva read- keep up the great work.

I really shouldn't be laughing at that, seeing as Shadow would kill me in my sleep, but I can't help it.

LOL THAT'S REALLY FUNNY!

1 thing to say-that was AWSOME!lol it made me laugh :ya ya can we go? me:(holds out shampoo)he hates this stuff makes his hair all sticky lol sonic:NO!me:sry gtg nice story-(chases sonic around with shampoo

LOL!

kawaii! That was siuper cute! I like ! YAy!

full of nonesnes

and fun

as we fiddle didii

all day long

with great joy

and pleasure

we bring you this

closer

Jajajajajajaja!

(giggle) super glue (giggle) pickle (giggle) this is so funny! the part where shadow crys is so out of chariter and king of all mood swings was just so funny! i loved this it's realy funny.

its creative but...you made shadow a spaz NEVER DO IT AGIAN!

but it does look like you didn't have a choice...ME CUNFUSED!

Hahahahaha! Absolutely great story! I can't wait to read the sequal, as well. Until then!

WTF!