| Reviews for Then She Was Gone |
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   dark lil'angel2be chapter 1 . 3/21/2013 Waaahhh :'( ! No, Diana you can't! Why?! Noo! ...Still great. But so sad! |
| DianaLombard1996 chapter 1 . 3/22/2008 A sad story!Next time write some adventure and have a happy ending |
| Diana Mystery chapter 1 . 11/17/2006 All in all, it was an excellent piece. Certainly much better than most of the other things I've read here. "life-something (The thingy where it’s zig-zaggy when the person’s still alive and a straight line when the person’s dead?)". You ruined it with that. You put a poorly-worded author's note in the middle of the text. It's a huge disappointment considering your vocabulary in the rest of the piece. By the way, the term you were looking for is life-line. Still, you're very good for someone who is 13 years old. You'll be a truly amazing author one day. |
| nobody chapter 1 . 6/15/2006 Good job. The machine is called an EKG (electrocardiogram, of electroKardiogram in england), btw. :) |
| golden-eyedwolf842 chapter 1 . 1/7/2006 Wow... what a nice fic. I was crying... Great job writing this! :P |
| animeroxz chapter 1 . 1/3/2006 Aw so sad and the machine is called a heart monitor poor martin |
| thebookwormxo chapter 1 . 11/15/2005 SO SWEET! SO SAD! LOVED IT! EVEN THOUGH IT WAS A MARTIN/DIANA FIC...IT WAS AWESOME! AND SAD! AND SWEET! DON'T FORGET SAD AND SWEET! |
| StarCyber2 chapter 1 . 11/10/2005 Aw... that is soo... sad ! I don't believe Martin didn't tell Diana about that becsuse of Marvin ! And I love your word it's so.. touching ! I almost cried . |
| Elie Hino chapter 1 . 11/6/2005 so sad yet buetiful.*baby goodbye in background*damn you*cries* |
| Martin Diana chapter 1 . 9/10/2005 cool.. and sad. I'm almost cry because it's so good |
| RavenKitten chapter 1 . 8/21/2005 Aw... So sad... This is so heart touching... *cries* WAHH! XD~ Poor Martin and Diana! ~Yes. I am the Raven. Fear meh.~ |
| elie3173 chapter 1 . 8/16/2005 ah so fuckin sweet write on dude. c'ya don't wanna b ya c ya later allgater ok BYE BYE love elie3173 SIKE |
| NEko3 chapter 1 . 8/8/2005 WAH! I LOVED THIS STORY! IT MADE MW CRY! IT IS SO0o0o0o0o0o0o AWeSOME!(sorry I can't spell3) NEko |
| Plastic Strawberries chapter 1 . 8/2/2005 Pretty good. It could've been better. Like Diana's death? It would've probably been better and more believeable if she died on a mission. It would've made it more angsty. You should also look up the name of that machine, it really brings down the story when you called it a 'thingy'. You should've had it been in Martin's 'POV' and then he could've called it a 'thingy', and it wouldnt of mattered. Can't wait to see more of your work, though. - Plastic Strawberries |
| Queen of the Mary Sue chapter 1 . 7/19/2005 FUCK YEAH! |
