| Reviews for Her rival, his attempt |
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   Star Wars Girl2015 chapter 19 . 5/8/2016 This is too amazing to stop here! You're a glorious writer compared to my carp XD please do continue sorry if all the stuff like this bugs u |
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/9/2016 Aww come on, that was an amazing story, and you just stopped there! |
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/1/2016 Please please please update soon... |
| Tank chapter 3 . 1/29/2016 Here's some constructive criticism for you: It needs correction in several sentences. And more variety in the vocabulary would greatly improve your fanfic. Just saying. The storyline has a lot of potential, so keep it up. :D |
| Trapped Under Glass chapter 19 . 1/10/2016 (T~T) BB, why u no update, BB? Pls, BB, I need the Grievous. |
| Guest chapter 19 . 8/19/2015 Did you stop? Oh please don't stop you need to continue! This is incredible! |
| Mercy chapter 19 . 6/6/2015 Oh my gosh. I love this story too much to stop! You need to continue! This is an amazing story. |
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/2/2014 "Grievous finally started to walk to the doors of the capital with Shika on his arm. Shika only kept her eyes forward, attempting not to look at the Sepratist leaders and others attending the party who were starring at the two of them with the most awkward looks." These song lyrics... "when we walk in the club, all eyes on us, all eyes on us. When we walk in the club, they watchen' us. They watchen' us." Best fan fiction EVER! Must have more! :D |
| raccoon stripe chapter 12 . 8/2/2014 Shika "How can fit in there with you?" *spongebob narrator "two minutes later" Shika "This is not what I had in mind!" I died at the part XD |
| General.g.Renny chapter 19 . 7/5/2014 Why the heck am I hearing grievous's voice the whole fan fiction!? This has never happened In my mind after reading fan fiction after fanfiction, This is so amazing! UUUUUPPPP DDDDDAAAAATTTTTTTTEEEEEE! My mind is incapable of holding so much suspense any longer! HEAR ME SOLIDFALCON! See that pen right there? Ya, right there? Pick it up, open the note book, and you will write the story! General. 's life is in your hands! |
| taniast chapter 19 . 6/19/2013 Hello there!:) This story is so amazing and I like the flow of the language too. I hope you want to write more some day, seeing as chapter 20 is long waited for;) Cheers! |
| Cooljoe64 chapter 19 . 4/16/2013 Now why did you stop, I was enjoying this :( |
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/31/2013 3 years...I hope you Eventually update (or have you disappeared?) Enjoyed it, really enjoyed this story |
| Cooljoe64 chapter 17 . 3/31/2013 Ouch, cheap move their Gunray, enjoying this story |
| Cooljoe64 chapter 7 . 3/30/2013 Dam this is good |
