I really love this even though I don't totally understand it it's so unique and different I love it! They're playing Anakin murders the Younglings, yeah? That was the part that I understood and anyway this is super great I love it a lot!

Interesting, thanks for shsring

Really nice. I enjoyed the end.

In the end Luke was trying to catch Ani.

I get shivers down my spine every time I read this. The imagery is dark and vivid, and a child-like "Monsters under the bed" type of fear makes it very powerful. I love it!

Laughed at this because so many people play the game now.

Also really loved your last line, because it's so very true. Cute take on Luke's childhood! :) ~ Jelp

...Crap. I just lost the game.

-.-

4chan's been playing The Game for ages now. Gee thanks. Lol.

But seriously. I love how you wrote in a child's voice, it was very realistic. And it was just so ironic how they used Ani's name.

wonderful fic and idea, I remember hearing about The Game some people in my homeroom played it once it lasted a week for them.

Hahah very clever! Nice work ;)

Great! I really like this story!:)

Well I'm officially blown away. How come no one else thought of that. Really brilliant.

Me likie very much. Is the foreshadowing intentional?

No one catches Luke Skywalker when he doesn’t want to be caught so that he can be Ani or Vader again, not even Cullem. An’ Cullem’s faster’n everyone else.

I can tell he doesn’t want to be caught this time, because he waits ‘till Witch is almost touching him but spins an’ almost runs away a little, but only far enough to be out of reach.

No one can catch Luke when he doesn’t want to be caught, no one. I bet not even Ani and Vader.

That's were I meant.

Another Star Wars children fic! I'm so glad i found your page.

Yeah, written well, a little confused as to who your narrator was (I'm guessing it was a random kid, but near the beginning i was thinking/hoping it was Wedge!)

The last line is particularly powerful.

wow-very creative i loved the "ani" part -and that they say the name without having any idea who it belongs to. that sounds like a really cool, creepy game!

This is a creepy story. It's been said before, but I love the narration from a child's view, it makes it all the more frightening. I can't help but repeat the comments already made. This story didn't scare me as to go running, but it definately chilled me to the bone at the implications. Very well written, the images that come to mind are amazing. I especially love the double meaning of the last line. Keep writing, you've got talent.

It's very haunting, which is odd because it's not scary. It just kind of feels cold, and seeps into you, but not in a frightning way. Hard to explain.