Reviews for Indemnity
The Lone Rurouni chapter 5 . 5/25/2012
A very good story. I very much hope for updates. And wish you luck with said updates.
scarman1987 chapter 5 . 10/21/2006
This is a very good story. I hope you manage to update sometime soon.
Tioman chapter 5 . 10/6/2006
write more!
korigo starless chapter 5 . 10/3/2006
this is an awesome story and i cant wait to read the next chapter (if you havent discontinued) the first and formost rule of fictioning is when you start a fiction just dont gettup and quit people really like ypu fic and we cant wait to see what happens so cmon update you know you wanna

good luck

korigo starless
getaiyou chapter 5 . 9/1/2006
No, man. I really like that.

YOU HAVE TO CONTINURE THIS ONE. IT TOTALLY ROCKS.

Just simply amazing.

I love you forever and ever if the next one is posted by the end of this year.
ShadowObscurity chapter 5 . 4/9/2006
It's been a while, I hope this story wasn't abandoned. *looks about* Ah well, even if it is, I still enjoyed reading it. A truly excellent story, and while there were a few grammar errors, it doesn't take away from the way the plot (and such) were executed. I'm happy.

I do look forward to more, though. _

- Shobs
hurrycurry chapter 5 . 2/10/2006
nice fic is naruto goin to go to konoha in the next fic update soon
saiyan prince1 chapter 5 . 12/17/2005
wow, update soon please, i really like it
Uchiki na Kage chapter 5 . 11/6/2005
ahh! update! This Naruto is sweet! But what happened to the kyuubi?
ranma hibiki chapter 5 . 11/6/2005
woah woah WOAH! slow down and add a bit more detail please. in just 2 chapters naruto found a monistary, found a long term crush, became a sealing master, learned some of his heritage, became a summoning master just casue he can summon more than one being at a time(frogs,fox, and phoenix) then left with a promise to return and went to the sand village...dont you think thats a little much for just 2 chapters?

its good, but it just looks like your rushing
DJ Rodriguez chapter 5 . 10/5/2005
0_0 Wow! This chapter is cool! I like Naruto and Moroi being together. They really do make a worthy couple, and also its good that both share and return an equal amount of love to one another.

Naruto is slowly becoming very powerful, both in mind and body. In a few more years, he will be a force to be recokened with! With the foxes, toads, and now phoenixes on his side, he will be on a whole new level!

I wonder how everyone Naruto has met previously will do when they see him as he is now? I bet the people in Wave Country will be in awe at seeing their hero so powerful, and the Konoha will really be stunned to see that Naruto has indeed changed for the better.

Armed with a new sword, new body, new techniques, and also new information that he is indeed ROYALTY, Naruto is off to make a name for himself. To carve his name in the Stone of Legends! Go Naruto!

Keep it up!
Lanara Bolina chapter 5 . 9/22/2005
very good story. i hope you update it soon.
Jetflash chapter 5 . 9/19/2005
Oh... Update soon! This is cool!
Krows Scared chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Great story with some very good and interesting ideas I hope you'll update soon!
Manorexia chapter 5 . 8/15/2005
I loved this story. You should update soon...like now...or tommorow...or the day after...or the day after that...or the day after THAt...ok I'm going to stop now. But still I loved this story, and I don't care if you think that Naruto is getting too powerful, I WANT HIM TO BE! And if you even THINK about giving Naruto a curse seal I will KILL YOU! NARUTO SHALL NEVER HAVE A CURSE SEAL! NEVER NEVER NEVER NEVER! I think that you should make Sakura all creepy stalker like when Naruto goes back to Konoha, cause he got so hott, and that he should turn her down and get married to whats her face. Then they can have kids who are all crazy ass summoner/sealer people cause thats what his bloodline is! Or you could just finish the story soon so that I don't go all nutso crazy on this review! Sounds good? Sounds good...
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