i really liked this. i know people hate when reviewers ask this, but were you ever going to finish it? i want to see how this ends...though it does actually kind of work with where it's ended anyway. hm, well anyway, this is a good story, and i love the way you have it written. great job!

OMG! this is so good! i NEED more! this is really really good! i'm all caught up in the drama!you must write more! are you like a screenplay writer? 'cause you're that good! i did not stop reading until the end! i yelled at my sister for interrupting me! write more! PLEASE!

beautiful. just, amazing.

I do not believe that you are only 15. that was so good, and really moving. Well done!

this is one of the best srorys i've ever read it made me cry buckets and buckets my fav quotee was "unconditional love is the harshest, most pure, most pathetic kind of feeling ryan can think off" this is the greatest you should write a third part from seths point of veiw you've got to keep writing this story please for me! it would make me so so so happy! -amy

this stoy is so so so so so amazing it made me cry buckets of tears in a so good way i felt so bad for ryan r u adding a third part from seths point of veiww cuz that would be the best i have read a diffrent stroy as good as this i love your ryan point of veiw it fab!

So, have you ever thought about writing for your profession? Seriously, you are amazing. You have an amazing way with words, and I couldn't stop reading this. I see you haven't updated anything in a while, but if you ever still get on here, please update this fic! I loved it.

i love it but if you kick trey out of the story it would be even better!

You'd better fix this mess, I mean it!

Ryan's gotta forgive Seth - it really is a fine line between love and hate, and for him to be hating Seth so much right now... well there's a whole lotta love there too.

Please make them happy again!

My heart is breaking, I'm feeling so damn emotional right now. Please continue, I love it!

Oh my God. I totally love your writing! This story is probably the best one I've ever read at

My heart be still. Damn girl, this is just genius!

Better than an episode of the O.C. ever could be. Great story AND it's well written. Keep it up!

this made me cry a little bit. your story gets better and better as it goes on, please continue.

"because it will cause too much pain in this little room and there isn’t enough space to hold all the tears they can’t shed"

i loved that

This has to be one of the best written pieces of fanfiction I've ever read. It shall be the first piece of O.C. fanfiction to go on my favorites list, and... I don't know. But I really like it; it's bloody amazing. Yeah.

this was absolutely amazing. you are absolutely amazing.