cute :)

Any story with an amusement park or a roller coaster is a great story by me!

It's been a while since this fic was written...but it's all the same...I just felt really...warm while reading this...great work...probably the best Hiro/Kisa out there! I really enjoyed your writting and story! GOOD WORK!

Aw, thank-you all so much! I feel so happy knowing you people liked my fanfic! I'm glad that some people thought it was very emotional, because that's exactly what I wanted to write-an emotional story. I don't really like Hiro's last thoughts either...They don't go with the rest of the last few paragraphs of the story...-slaps forehead- Baka...Anyway, I'm so glad I got 22 reviews! That isn't much...but still! 22! That's better than anything I've gotten so far! XDD; Gosh, I'm so pathetic...Oh, and thank-you, thank-you, THANK-YOU for putting up with all my grammer errors. I absolutely hate grammer. XP 'Kay, well, that's about it...I'm thinking of writing another Furuba fanfic after I'm done with my Azumanga Daioh one, but I might get wrapped up in other things since school is starting soon! Ack! O_o

Bai-bai, and arigatou to you all

~Akina Hasegawa, the author~

Oh my goodness.

My friend's aren't going to believe this.

Okay, my friends have a while ago gotten my into Fruits Basket (Actually Riles lent me the DVD's) (Yes, I know her in real life, best friend of mine. ;) But! I fell in love with it and I swear everytime something touching or somewhat sad happens, I cry! I've NEVER cried over my more obsessions and this, I do and I have to tell you, your fic made me cry. CRY! xD! That's a good thing, though! Although, I'm starting to becoming a sap, I don't care! This was very well written and I enjoyed it very much! I've always thought Kisa and Hiro were really cute and this... Wow, this was adorable. Pity I didn't read it sooner, but I've been taking a break from fanfiction. Hehe. Well, wow. I'm amazed at how good this was. I LOVED it. Your so on my favorite's list right now.

Keep up the good work! *Ish still has tears coming down* xD

-Vikki-

I'm going to tell you something. And then you're going to die of surprise. Are you ready?

I didn't find any errors. Nada. Perhaps I wasn't looking closely enough, but I didn't see any. So you should be happy. _

I loved the story. Very cute, but I'm not sure I quite liked Hiro's last thoughts... Hmm... anywayz, I really did enjoy the fic, and I look forward to reading the last chapter of your KND fic!

Loved it,

~Riles

I loved it! That was so sweet. I think that was wonderful. Kisa is so sweet and most people seem to overlook her when it comes to the series. They always look at Tohru, Yuki, and Kyo. Kisa is a little angel and I like the way you used the wings. That was swwt. You should write more! You are excellent at this and I look forward to seeing your future work!

aw. hiro-san is always so sweet 2 kisa-chan. im weird i no. this is so sweet

Oh! THis is SO CUTE! I know I say that like everychapter, but still! I love it!

~Silver (was too tired to sign in, you know it's me though, so that doesn't matter.)

Aw! Cute! Great job on this fic! I really like it.

aw...so cute!

Great last chapter! That angel comment took me off guard. o_o

Oh, poor Hiro. (did I say that last review too? What ever) And Poor Tohru. And Porr Kisa caught up in the very middle.

Hello again!

"She remember Kyo had called her an airhead on many an occasion because of it, but he never said why…" *Remembered and *occasions "She didn’t even take into account that they were the one’s who had wandered off..." You don't need an apostraphe in "ones". "In the mean time..." It's actually "meantime". "Kisa giggled at his remark," Period, not a comma. _ "Hang on, you two, she though, I’m coming to find you!" *Thought "...then spun and let the next group off and so on, until Kisa and Hiro were inside one of the carts." I think you would actually move the comma from "on" to "off". "Figures, he though angrily," *thought "child-hood friend" *childhood "He watched as Kisa ran to Tohru, and Tohru half laughed half sobbed and hugged her as she came to her." There should be a comma after laughed and sobbed.

Yay! I liked the chappie. It's so sad, though. Every time Hiro tries to tell Kisa he loves her, Tohru has to intervene... . So close, and yet so far away. Can't wait for the next update!

Lovin' it,

~Riles

:X Hiro is so mean! *smacks him on the head* Tohru is funny, though... falling asleep like that. ha ha ha!