it's vegeta not vegita

I love this story, I continued reading it on your website and just love it... Please Continued with the story, I would like to see what happens! Specially Mamoru and Usagi's Relationship :D

i like how usagis showing bits of her saiyan heritage with the taunts, smirks, confidence, and bloodlust/ thirst for battle, shes gotta bit of vegeta in her, which is awesome, and can you have her be proud to be a saiyan

really, they just see a guy fly and they're like ok whatevs nothing special, and it feels like youve really nerfed the z fighters, they can move faster than the eye can see and can cause giant craters from pure strength,

oh god please dont tell me your going to have all the senshi be fighters, that sucks, and they wont be able to keep up with usagi when she goes super saiyan since they are human, and what about zenkai boost

yes become awesome, usagi become the golden bunny of doooooom

isnt usagi supposed to be a saiyan, and one thats partially always in super saiyan form, she should be really strong for a 5 year old girl

This is a wonderful story. I first read it back in 2002 when I was in high school. I really admire your creativity and writing when it comes to fanfiction. Please, update!

good chapter

I'm not even sure if you're reading this or not...but I hope you do find the time to finish this wonderful story, I remember when I started reading it in high school and I was hooked,lol! It took me years to find this story again and even more this website...I never thought I would feel the excitement of reading a fanfic again,but this one has to be to greatest story I've read since started reading anime fan-fictions...but like I said I hope sometime in the near future you'll be able to finish it.

wow, I read this story back in high school (back in 2004 i think it was) and I had LOVED it back then.

NOW I love it just as much as when I had first read it way back when :) I really wish that you would update on your website. we've all been waiting for an update for a few years now lol

Soooooo i know its been a ahilé but you shld finish this story pleaseeeee

okay so I love this story! I finished up to here in less than a week and REALLY REALLY REALLY want the next chapter. Please hurry and don't quit on it. It's one of my fav's!

I really really really like this story! X3 this has got to be the fourth time I've read this story and I finally got all caught up. Now I'm sad cuz there's nothing after chapter 22 of book 9. When ya gonna update?

i have read this fic years ago and i loved it i plan to reread it again soon.