Excellent! What a work.. I really admire you.. I can't say much more because of the awe.. One of the best fanfics I read, you made me much inspire to make a fanfic of the both too. Keep it up! :)

One of the best things about this fic is it's perspective. You manipulate it quite well. Well rounded, romantic, lovely. This is an excellent work.

really nice story but u know the story she will be loved where is it?

I just got the game not to long ago, and Cao Pi is my fsvorite player on it. I also appreciate this pairing, I know hardly anything of the DW series because this is the first game I have. But anyways, I seem to have understood enough to see how these two are always ended up together

The second person narrative made it very unique compared to the other Zhen X (anyone) fics I've read. I enjoyed it alot. :) Please, keep up the good work _

I really likes it because I never knew what second person was..but yeah...very caring and lovely...do go on with Yaoi. _*

wowz...this is really nice. And it's done in second person. *applauds* I myself can never pull that off. :P

But, one little thing. Cao Pi calles Zhen Ji "Zhen"-so, (maybe you already know this) technically he'd be calling her by her last name. Chinese names are written with the last name in front. Though 'Zhen' does sound much better than 'Ji'. :D

Well, otherwise, this is a beautiful fic and I believe you've portrayed them just right. :)

That was great! I love Cao Pi/Zhen Ji stories! They are the best couple. Zhen's musou was SO cute! I watch it a lot lol. There should be more stories like these here!

Your work is always so thoughtful and your style is uncomparable. I adore it.

Ayu! *coos* I love your romances. I can't even begin to say how much I love them. XD And this was no exception. Though this has less of the pristinely polished air of a couple of your other works, that's what makes it so lovely. Real, in a sense. . The second-person view works for you. It lapses in a few places, but that's no sin.

Excellent work, and other such compliments.

Yup, another well written fic! Loved how the beginning linked with the ending... ugh... This fic gets me all worked up.. need to go play some DW!

GREAT WORK!

I'm quite surprised to see a second person narrative; they're few and far between and rarely done well. Well, this is obviously an exception. I'm impressed; you've done a good job of this, and the second person is actually appropriate. My word o.o Well, I'm also glad that you didn't make Zhen Ji a snooty little load of pixels as I have seen in other places. I'm glad they made Cao Pi a character in Dynasty Warriors; it's about bloody time : I haven't got the game yet so I can't compare your Cao Pi to DW5 Cao Pi. But then that really doesn't matter because I like your Cao Pi. Makes me wish I was marrying him, that git. Um, yeh... good job :D

When I came across your fanfiction I was a little nervous seeing that I had read alot of Cao Pi and Zhen Ji, and none of them were very good, but this one was awesome, I miust say. I adore Dynasty Warriors, and I love this couple together (I'm making the fanlisting for them soon -) Anyway, I like the whole 2nd person thing you had going on, and the way you wrote it sounded like the two did in the game. Once again, very well done...

OMG! I'm so sorry about that earlier review...It cut off most of my real was like the first line! Eep! Anyways, I put that there because after I said that that line is going to be stuck in my head _~;;.Oh,we need more Zhen Ji/Cao Pi fics around here! Great job on the 2nd person narrative. _I can't wait to read more.

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We seriously need more Cao Pi/Zhen Ji around here. The ending of Zhen's mosou mode was so sweet! And you really did a great job of capturing that moment...you described their feelings exactly the way I would have thought.

And yeah, I agree, Draco and Cao Pi share DNA or something O.o And who cares about the accurate history? Screw it! The games are MUCH more fun _

Anyway, this was very good. I think I'll put it in my favorites!