Very nice. I loved the part near the end where Eirika flirtatiously gives him that boner by sitting on his lap.

Seriously...there need to be more authors like you, who see Eirika/Ephraim as the wincestuous couple that they are!

Great story there was another I read fanfic where the twins got in "intimiate", but in the end Eirika makes Ephraim marry L'archel instead despite her feelings. The part of the plot involved Ephraim having to get married because he was the king. I forgot the the title but if anybody remembers don't be afraid to say it.

What a Great story. They make a Gret cupple.

Holy of Mother of Shine! *stammers shocked* How... Queerish. I'd honestly have to say that would never in a million years happen between my brother and I. For that matter, most likely no one I know would have that kind of relationship. I'm just... Well, shocked, sorry. *leaves, still stammering in disbelief*

this story was...kinda freakin creepy okay? i mean what compelled you to write this story?

Ha, i always KNEW those two were WAY too close. Man, is Eirika a dumb-a. Ha, that was funny...hehe. i liked this one!

WOW nice fic man, keep writing more

WOAH dude, whats going on, aint Eirika and Ephraim brothers and sisters, eww, they just had sex, LOL what am i saying?, COOL dude keep up the great work

... You are my new god.

Eirika and Ephraim are without a doubt my favorite couple in the history of anything, this an amazing story.

Ive played the game already and i must say its the best game ive played Nice fic man, bit funny but love the pairings. i always match them in the game and they always do critical hits _

I have no words other than that this was awesome. Eirik/Ephraim is one of my favorite pairings in the game, and I can so picture a scenario like this happening.