It's good enough you kept my attention all the way at the end too. Without cringing either
LUV_ANGEL(offline reading)

And He doenst GO AFTER HER Come one Seriously?
LUV_ANGEL(offline reading)

Okay she just Runs out. Runs away so easily? Didn't she have a hurt leg not that long ago. Kagome was limping and hopping on it for crying out loud
LUV_ANGEL (offline reading)

Ummm just one catch..a question really...Since Inuyasha is close enough to hear Kagome's words; Why doesn't he FacePlant the Ground as she is talking to Aayame? I mean Kagome says 'sit' in that one sentence_"I'm not going to Sit here_" The single word Sit is the command of the beads.
Other than that I like what I am reading .
LUV_ANGEL (offline)

Good story. Just wished Koga and Ayame could have worked out.

thanks for the story..

what,... why she appear? is that mean inuyasha happines...with her? oh No..!

NOOOOO... please dont do thatto kagone.

I know you wrote this story forever ago but I just read it an I would like to say this story is amazing and you are a genius. There were some points I wanted to shoot you, but other than that it was great!
Thank you
Inukag4eva2282

Sooooo... Sesshomaru didn't mark her. You frogetting makes me feel some type of way.. especially since you brought up the act of marking when you wrote the scene between Jo Jo & Kagura

Kikyou? KIKYOU! How DARE Inuyasha think of bitchy KIKYOU at a time like this?! His intended MATE just DIED but he was thinking of that walking claypot KIKYOU! WHAT THE FUCK! Urrgghhhh

wonderful fic veary sexey insent fav

I get mad about things like that too

A-freaking-mazing! I didn't finish reading it until I finished all the chapters! Loved it!

Wow, could that have been any more out of character.