Right in the feels.

ihank you for the shoelace universe. i enjoyed the trip

I laughed. I cried. And cried some more. Great series. Thank you!

Great story.

Aw... that was such an adorable story! I loved it.

I don't know if I reviewed this story when it came out, but if I didn't I am sorry. I have fibromyalgia and arthritis that occasionally puts me in a wheelchair. I am also allergic to every pain med ever made.

This story is one of the things I can turn to to take myself away from the pain. I have read it many times and will probably read it many more times in the future.

Thank you for this precious gift. I just got through reading about him getting Danni and Father's Day. I teared up at both chapters. Again.

Thank you for all your hard work.

Beverly

thank you so much for this powerful story. i loved it and yes i was on the verge of tears. it's one of the best dannykid fic i read.

nana lee

WOW! I just loved this series. I have to say that my heart broke for Jack in this last story...especially when Daniel thought that he had taken away another of Jack's sons. :)

THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL (insert a hundred-million exclamation points for emphasis which I can't add because of FF's rules but you get the picture)!

your writing was amazing, your story lines were beautiful and touching and funny and tense and absolutely perfect, your characters were true to their originals, and i'm really happy that i stumbled (literally) across this story. Definitely one of my favorite SG-1's stories (perhaps one of my favorites period) and i will be coming back from time to time to re-read it. LD is so stinking cute. and i loved how Teal'c called him "daniel o'neill" (squees of joy). loved it all.

Thanks for this,

DarkX

I really liked this whole series, and I love that you made Daniel grow up in the end. Very cute and touching. :)

That was perfect

I wasn't really sure what to expect, but somewhere around chapter four, I was hooked.

Can't say which part is my favorite, though, because all of this is just so wonderful. I love how you've managed to capture a six-year-old Daniel while still portraying his older self, and how those two aspects sometimes clashed against each other.

I am really glad I got the chance to read your story. It was well written. Though by the note at the top of Chap. 20, I thought that Daniel would be little forever. It did make me sad though. Wonderful job.

This story is beyond adorable. Great great work! I loved every mintue of it. It was a pure delight to read.

Hm..

This story is very touching. Very interesting.

And very helpful!

You see, I've been wrestling with my own first SG1 fanfic (Fisher price? ergh) but seeing as it revolves around Clone Jack... well, I've been having trouble aligning the way his character is in my head, how it appears on tv, how it appears in other fics and what would likely happen should such an event occur in real life. (Not to mention Jack's own tendancies to act like a teenager at times.. it's endearing and frustrating at the same time, but it also adds confusion when trying to characterise a 50-something O'Neill into a 15 year old body...)

ANYWAY back on track. Your depiction of Daniel's mind battling against the subconcious mind of his own body was extremely helpful (mostly because it agreed with my own thoughts, and laid it out clearly). The body DOES affect the mind, a lot more than we give it credit. Not only in the chemical sense (which, going through the turbulent years of childhood & puberty, are crazy) but also in the behavioural and comprehension sense. Their brains are still developing. Still changing. Still pre-programmed with basic instincts!

That battle between Daniel's selves was one of the reasons I enjoyed this story so much... although the adorable interaction between him and Jak came a close second. Excuse me whilst I go all gooey... :)

It was a sad ending... but the right one, I think. The sadness of loosing his life and friends would have been worse, than causing Jack to loose another son.. even a surrogate one.

Thanks for writing this!