Reviews for Clarity
JenEvan chapter 15 . 11/8/2006
for such a serious piece(which sounds so in the beginning),I never thought it'll end in such an amusing way O_O(hungry moving tree goin round world for its dinner...)Nice
fandom chapter 15 . 9/19/2006
thanks for the nice story and the happy ending. your writing is good but there're some spelling errors. keep on writing, you're a good writer.
Angelike Riddle chapter 15 . 7/12/2005
Yea! A happy ending! I knew there was a reason I liked you... _~ Anyway, beautifully done! Kudos to you for finishing! And the fact that you posted the whole thing in hardly a month is certainly worth noting. I could never do that. But that's besides the point! The point is that I love your story very very much and hope to see more by you in the future.
shichandeathgirl chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
ah...you just gotta love the sadistic people nya? but this is very confusing. though i like it alot, it's confusing...but it's really good...i just don't get it...
ChaosDragon chapter 12 . 6/22/2005
sorryt I haven't read & reviewed before...glad Sei isn't dead...

anyways, I'll finish betaing today (hopefully) and send it to you...THIS TIME I HAVE A GOOD EXCUSE! I WAS IN THE HOSPITAL! T.T not fun...

neway, love the story! _
Silver Salamander chapter 4 . 6/10/2005
Damn... Just noticed something I missed :(

Nice writing _
mikage chapter 4 . 6/10/2005
wonderful story...hope that it'll have a happy ending..._
Silver Salamander chapter 3 . 6/9/2005
Nice work.

Super subaru eh? Superstar, what a silly song name _

Tomorrow eh?

I'm looking forward to it.

Nice work with the club scene (unfortunately I am already in beta-mood which means I was looking for spelling errors _)

Nevermind, it was still very good _
Silver Salamander chapter 2 . 6/7/2005
Just noticed your authors notes from the first chapter.

I'd be happy to BETA this for you if you want, seeing as Chaosdragon is busy and all.

If you want to take me up on the offer you can start sending chapters straigt away, my email is

Anyway, on with the actual review _

Really getting into this fic now, it just has that *thing* about it which I like. Not sure what the 'thing' is but the story is really, refreshing and... something?

Whatever it is I really like it.

Hope you continue soon _
Silver Salamander chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Nice work, I like, like a lot.

If only I could draw, then I would, alas I cannot.

Update soon ne?