sounds bitter. i'd have to reread it to make sense of it, but it sounds pretty good first time round.

brittney

wow that was really really good :) i mean really really really good

huh? Did holly kill herself?

Ah, beautiful. You're defintely a poet (like myself, though I'm not very good, hehe). Definitely going on my favorite fics list...

~ SD

this is really good. Are u gonna become a poet or something when u grow up?

Strange, but good. A very neat voice to write in.

this was really interesting; I liked it a lot. Was it a one shot? If so...PLEASE! WRITE MORE!...sorry about the slight nervous break-down thing...heh heh

sorry. MEANT to say 'you never really forget' not 'when the worst it yet to come'. *suspicious look* you changed the name, right? I'm not just being INCREDIBLY brain dead?

*glares* you fiend. you've gone and become some fantastically amazingly wonderfully talented writer and you're SHOWING EVERYONE ELSE UP. *mutters jealously*

that was beautiful, very lovely. *waves stern finger* I want to see more and more and more like this! *thinks* though you DID most this literally DAYS after finishing when the worst is yet to come, so I guess I can't complain. yet!

Great poem. Is it one? Sound like one. Well I think it was the greatest Artemis poem that I've read so far. Your poem really inspired new ideas for my own story. Thanks a lot. I will remember to check out your other story.

This was a bit...unorganized. Well, that's what it seemed to me as. So...tell me if I'm right:

1. This is a one-shot.

2. This is ArtyXHolly.

3. Holly killed herself/ sacrificed herself.

and

4. This supposed to be about fate being a curse and a gift, but more a gift

These might be ultimetly obvious for someone but at the moment I am brain dead. I thought it would be a bit more better if you explained yourself/the theme better. You know, for us brain dead people.

~Lori

i've read it and this - this is actually quite good. cheers!

Are you a poet? I mean, like, proffesional. Because that was amazing!

beautiful.