You have to come back to finish this... Please... I nearly cried several times for Kite. Please come back!

...wow..its really good..um..but can u shorten the converstaions?i'm more interested in the story...good work!pls continue this

interesting

Cool! I like this one!

T_T Kite!

this story is AWESOME! It's so sad, in a way. Poor Kite! I love your explinations on all of this too. I can't wait till the next chappie!

YES YOU FINALLY UPDATED! There has been maybe only ONE or TWO fanfics of .hack that are actually GOOD! The new ones are all about OC's! (cries) What's so bad about the original characters..?

Anyways, yep, it's true. Not really s'pose to respond to the reviewers anymore... (cries again) But i still do that. Hopefully i'm not doing anything bad... (looks around)

Y'know... It's like my Technology teacher says, "Computers are stupid." They screw up your things, make internet go down, and don't put up your logged on name. Maybe i should start telling people that...

AND POOR KITE!

AAH! TARVOS WAS A PAIN IN THE ASS TO DEFEAT! Whenever i play the .hack games, i have a rule for myself: ALWAYS BRING A WAVEMASTER! Hehe, they're the best at healing and whatnot, and can end up being the most powerful (besides Kite, of course) person in your group. And when i first battled Tarvos, i had NO IDEA that i'd be going against a phase... i thought it'd be a data bug! So... let's just say that i had a REEAALLY hard time defeating him... And how come it seems like everytime Tarvos did that attack with the stick he always went for Kite? That's how it was for me... dunno 'bout you.

Well, i do hope you update soon. (cries) I've been in school for a while now.. (i go to year round, so...) I guess i'll have to be stuck in the Zatch Bell section for a while until another good .hack fic comes out. (sigh)

Well, ja ne! And update soon!

Hello Sargent Snarky,

As a newcomer to FanFiction, I was very interested in seeing what people write about .hack. Actually the way I was introduced to this site was a link leading to your "System Error" story. I'm not sure, but I think that I've developed a preference to your writing style as opposed to most others at FF.

Anyway, what I'm trying to say is that I'm a big fan of your work. Overall, my favorites would have to be this story and Antilogy. (FoSM was just so sad *sniff*).

As to Systematic Error, I really enjoy it. This is a great idea for a story and probably something I would have written about if you hadn't taken the idea first. (*sigh*, oh well)

Anyway, thank you for finding a way of making use of your imagination that benefits all of us. I look forward to more of your stories. I will soon be putting a story up called Hapax Legomenon, I hope you will grace it with your reading of it sometime.

Your devoted fan,

Krulmagus

Haha, that is one of my favorite quotes. That movie was better than the original. The original was about "pursuing your dreams" or something like that.

Tarvos is icky-ish (that word rocks almost as much amusingful!). He has the shape, color, and texture of dung. Not pleasant, is he? I like Skeith better. Don't bother asking why, because I don't know. I'll say something vague like "'Cuz I do!".

Gr! School is evil! I start in two days *starts crying*

Hi...

i want aura to get all of her data and be able to help kite!

i want aura!XDD

aura rulez!

please update soon

good luck

As always, a fantastic addition to a Un-Freaking-Believable Story. I MUST know what happened to Kite! Your stories make me want to watch the Anime and play the games again... But alas, school starts very soon, and high school shall envelop me once more. Eh, life sucks!

So then, do well in school, but WRITE TOO! OR ELSE! Or else I'll... I'll... Go cry in my corner until you update!

Nessmk2

PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE

THIS CAN NOT END LIKE THIS!

Wow...I really, really love this story. You need to get the next chapter up as fast as you can!

Please Please Please Continue

Hooray! Chapter Four! So sad, though...T.T Now get the next chapter up, darnit!