I don't want it to eeeeeennnnnnd. Me wants lemon. Please?

LEMON!

LEMON SCENE! _

Cute ending! Good story!

I was right. I dont like Bakura. Great chapter!

I think I like Seto! I cant wait to see what Bakura's really like. Great chapter!

Once again, I feel bad for Yami. I think Ryou out to get him lol! Great chapter!

I never read any Yu-Gi-Oh fics, but yours is good so far. Great chapter!

i say yes to the lemon cause i'm bored.

Since it has been such a long update, I had to reread the story. This chapter does tie up a lot of loose ends, such as establishing a relationship between Yami and Ryou. The ending does leave some room for embellishment, but not too much that the story seems unfinished. I suppose if you wanted to, you could end the story here.

This chapter was pretty sweet. I like how Yami had this revelation of his sexuality. I also like how Yami and Ryou interacted. Good job.

Aw cute _ and yea you should write a lemon *nods* please write the next chapter soon please i can't wait to read it

Overall, this story is fantastic. Great job. It's random, but not to the point where it doesn't make sense. It's funny, but not to the point where it's ridiculous. I am loving the relationship between Seto and Yami. They really do seem like cousins. I especially enjoyed the cape comment by Yami. Again, great job.

I am finding so much random stuff to review on. "Clandestine kinkiness"? That is perhaps the funniest thing I have ever heard of. I just find Seto and Yami's relationship to be so sarcastic.

I was going to wait to review until I've read all the chapters, but I just had to comment on the spleen thing. It's so random. Well, that's all for now.

Hehe, I think it's funny especially the cow thing... the Pharaoh back then in leather amongst all the robes...ah, smexy