Absolutely entertaining! I was laughing the whole time. At one point my husband got curious as to what I was reading cause I was laughing like a maniac! Great story. Hope you keep writing forever.

I absolutely loved your story! I think it's amazing how you were able to mimic Sousuke's strange English and give so much insight in his thought processes. I especially liked the notion of him over-contemplating everything and the breach on philisophy.

Great job!

Oh wow! I truly love this!

I had to get a FF account JUST to comment on your work!
This was fantastic to read. I loved every minute of it- and this is coming from someone with severe fanfic ADHD. I typically NEVER finish a fanfic. This one held me captive the entire time.
I think you are a wonderful writer- and I love the way you inwardly portray Sagara! Very nice!

I am very impressed with this work, great characterization, everyone's very well portrayed even if Sousuke does seem slightly OOC at times but he's still believable. Then I like first person narrative.

P.S. I was unable to do many more reviews due to FFN problems

I nearly died from reading the paper airplane scene. My gosh. Sasuke is too much.

Ohmigod Poor boy. His indecisiveness is going to be the end of him.

u know your a heck of a writer when u made me finish readng this
though some doubts on portrayng bout Sous's POV, this end made it worth squeling! !,and why u ask? Coz
ryt now i just fnshed readng it and its already 5am,meaning no sleep,just cloaking myself letting it take over my sleepines and excitment on 'what's goin 2 happen next?!' hahaha nice work, pls cont updatng their tandem,, :)

read first few chapters, i must say i got taken by the lines, funny and almost cleverly cute
but i'll add my opinion that his actions from end of chapter 2 made me think that
his acts here, making him think such as "hey, excuse me, you interrupted my Kaname watching time" made it bit from his stiff military craze charac thinking ..sighs still im happy you made this thumbs up!
P.S. will like f next time you make SS/KC fan fic that their charac still would appear closely same from manga
Thanks!

Just finshed chap 1, it'd take just
d 1st few lines to burst lol moment but not loud enough
to cause dsturbance frm fellow strbucks custms,, u made me cringe squeckly of how ths guy is so BAKa!
Hahahah yeah,that'd could be hm alright.
P.S.(insert to the story) he shud push to consider seeing a Doctor 4 that 'condition' since he's so rigid 'bout it!
"Love can be so life-threatening"
nice work! Pls update 'identity crisis' t.y.

Why would Sousuke have so much trouble with English? He does speak the language fluently, after all. Of course, that doesn't mean he couldn't have some trouble, as evidenced by Kaname (who also speaks at least near-fluent English) when she told the TDD-1 crew, "Don't worry, everything is gonna end happy!" but it would still have to be one of his better subjects.

I love it!

I love the way you write and how sousuke, despite sounding OOC, still remains as being sousuke

I totally love it!

I had to read the last chapter again...
It's so good...
Eughhhhhh
I can't handle this, it doesn't all fit inside of me!

I first read this story a long time ago...and now I'm back...I've reread it. AGAIN.
Crossing the Line is my favourite chapter...I'm always just completely awestruck and engulfed by your story whenever I read it.
Please, please, PLEASE make more Kaname/Sousuke stories like this! Preferably with chapters that ignite the same anticipation and excitement as Crossing the Line...it was absolutely superb. It leaves me speechless. Yet again. (And I find sexual tension VERY entertaining. Especially the humourous kind. It leaves me in STITCHES.)
And damn, those were some intimate moments in there.

Please keep writing, before I start crying with anticipation!
D,:
-Snoodle
P.S. You rock. You just...rock. Keep rockin'.

I just have to comment on the fact that you wrote the characters spot on, it feels like they where written by the original FMP author. keep up the good work.