Dude, use your fucking wand. Jesus...

I like it!

Hmm.

You are the chosen one!

It was short but interesting fic. Im not a fan of the veela transformation, but your approach was intruiguing, and I enjoyed the story. In very few words, you fleshed out characters and situations in a way a lot of authors cant in 100.000 words.

Lov it

Very well written. Shame it isnt longer, but it suits as a standalone, but you know, wouldn't mind a few more chapter.

Anyhow, I really liked it. It was... Different.

Please, write more!

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Chris

Awesome ending! *cracks up laughing* Wow, you really like these kind of stories where women seduce Harry don't you? Just a thought since I just finished reading that one with Harry & Narcissa. Normally, I don't like Harry/Fleur stories although I don't mind reading stories about a Good!Fleur. Nonetheless, this story was very cool and the Veela fight was epic and totally bada$$. You've really got tallent but I sadly have to go now, I will check out your Harry/Bella story as soon as possible though, brilliant stuff! :)

Kinky way to find a mate. Thanks for sharing!

would be much better with more to it but eh.

i luv this story!

good fic dude

wow that was a shocker man and keep writing because that was good so update your new stories soon.

Yep...the only way to determine a good man is to roast the shit out of them...lol

right that is kinda werid