Great story. Wish it ended differently though ️

Hi there again, I just wanted to let you know, that I might have posted a story you'd like...

wow. so far this was the best one I read about Abby...

though I'm shocked that you let her die, I really didn't expect that. Though I wondered how it would affect Abby, since after her rescue everyone seemed to do the wrong thing. And when I noticed, I had only a few chapters left, I figured there wouldn't be time to heal for her.

I was wondering- do you think she could have been "healed"?

Wonderfully written story! Very sad...well written!

amzing

it was a heart warming story, you have got to write more like this.

i thought abby was going to live, after susan said all that stuff.

i felt like i was going to cry when abby died

so depresing...

so sad... sniff, sniff...:( ::( :( :(

its really good, but its like the saddext story ive ever read...

it reminded me of the movie MILLION DOLLAR BABY

I liked this story. If you get a chance you should write more. You are a really good writer.

OMFG! I was almost crying! How could you kill off Abby! I don't mean to sound like a bitch but, you killed off Abby! Sorry for sounding mean. It was a good story though. You did a good job writing it.

you are a MONSTER of MAMMOTH PROPORTIONS! how could you NOT write more to this story? I NEED CLOSURE!

wow i would never think that I would cry over a fan fic an dnot many fanfics do you have a great talent keep using it i look forward to read your fanfics

ah, i cant believe she died! this chapter was awesome...raw and emotional, very beautifully written. but still, i cant believe she died! im hoping for some sort of miracle over here to bring her back in the next chapter... anyway, update again soon. i cant wait to read more!

This is so sad. Why? I still like it, its still great. Keep up the good work!

That was amazing a brilliant piece of writing and so emotional. I didn’t expect her to die but I don’t see how you could have ended it any other way. I loved this story even if you did make me cry!

OMG! You killed her! But you did it really well (that sounds kinda weird but I hope you know what I mean). When Susan was saying goodbye to her- I had tears in my eyes! (and I don't usually cry at stories).

No no nonono.. You don't really want to do that. KILL Abby, I mean. Well, there's absolutely nothing that I can do. So.. I think that I just have to get used to this..