That was really appropriate. I don't think the Atlantis writers could have done any better.

fantastic :D :D

Oh my God, that was adorable. But Rodney, a womaniser? I totally loved the part about Rodney scolding the Marines, though. Really, that's just SO Rodney. And this is actually kind of what I would expect their first meeting to be like. I think you did an excellent job with this.

I really like your writing and because of that I really like all your stories. You do humor very well and from that I can only guess you are a very humorous person.

:-) You really portray the characters well too. I am not just talking about this story but your others too.

Hey I thought it was hilarious can you do more pre- rising stories?

I like this! I actually just finished writing my first chapter of a story about Rodney and Elizabeth's first meeting, so it was nice to get someone else's impression of it before I post mine. You captured Weir's irreverent sense of humor well, and Rodney's actions are pretty spot on. Good job!

lol great! *wipes tears* just that Dr. Rodney McKay we knew back from SG1 times

Ha! Very good. Very Rodney-like.

Loved this

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lol!

great fic!

I like the idea of her first encounter with Rodney beginning with him yelling at someone. This is charming and funny all at once. Plus, cameos of Peter always make things extra good.

Hmm, well I didn't think the beginning sounded Rodney - OTT (what was with touching repetition, I think Rodney would be more witty and not simply insulting) and Grodin sounded off too with the Doc... as did Weir for me (plumbing companies named Dr. Weir...?) but I am fussy so feel free to ignore that. Liked getting more stories but would love to read more of your angsty stuff, a lengthier one.