great job!bravo!

Keep it up!

Oh!and please read and review my YUUHI x AYA fanfic if you've got time, i hope you'll love it!

I'm a first timer here, hope to read more from you!

omg o love your story *happy tear* :) this is how the manga and the anime should have turn out.

Such a solution was clearly implied at the ending of the series. I know Yuuhi would always be there for Aya, especially after Toya would pass. And little by little he would win her eventually, they would be together. I know it would have happened so and yours was a nice take on a variation on how would it happen. so arigato-nice job.

It's amazing! I loved it! I just finished watching the series not too long ago, and this really hit the spot. Terrific story, and I hope you continue to write as well as you just did.

Whoa! That was so adorable...sad but still cute. I've always love Yuhi and Aya together...they seemed to have more of an innocent love in some way. I also did love Hotohori and Tasuki more than Miaka and Tamahome together. (I guess I love the third wheel more..-) I think though that Aya named the girl Miku or I heard she did...don't know if its true really. But I loved this one-shot. It blended in their emotions perfectly. It is sad how Toya doesn't live forever to see his and Aya's child grow up. Well one thing I did notice. Your title...as cute as it is really doesn't suit the angst theme you were probably going for. (or so I assume) Even though I think the title is extremely cute. Anywho, great one-shot and do continue to write.

sweetness personified..

loved the story; thumbs up to it..

keep the good work up!

I love this story! its so kawaii and everything! if your'r going to update i hope its soon!

i like it and all but i think they're moving a little too fast. even if it has been a year...

Losing...my...MIND... I'm SO SORRY we haven't spoken (in WAY too long) - things have been absolutely crazy. My new work center is at 30 percent manning (Where did everybody go?) and we're about to launch into our Operational Readiness Inspection.

I really liked this story. You're right; there aren't nearly enough Ceres fanfictions out there. Kind of like Hikaru No Go, or Naruto. Quick question - was this a one-shot? It has the feel of being one, but I wasn't sure.

Wonderfull! This story is simply fantastic! I'm an italian girl that love so much the pairing Yuhi/Aya. And your fanfiction is what I always want by that anime/manga.

I'm really happy!

Great!

Yay! A YuhixAya fic! I think they look good together better than Aya and Toya ever did. I am happy that you gave Yuhi a chance to be with the woman he loves most. It's about time Aya loved him! You shouold write more fics. XD I hope you could do a sequel to this or something.

WAH! YOU KILLED OF TOYA! (that's how you spell it ;) ) *sniff sniff* *blows nose* I am one of the biggest Ceres fans out their, I own all of the anime and every manga that has come out in america. It wasnt bad, but you killed of the sexy red headed Toya. Shame on you. No hard feelings though.

Aw! I was in tears as I read this! I loved that Toya and Aya were together but I always felt sorry for Yuhi that he loved Aya and couldn't have her. I love your story and YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE OR I WILL HURT YOU SEVERELY! _ J.K. I really did like your story and would really really really really like it if you wrote more!

Wonderful story. I always did love Yuuhi best out of he and Touya. Of course, I always loved Hotohori best out of he and Tamahome...guess I like the underdog. Very touching and very happy ending. It's nice to know some of how Ceres ended...I haven't seen the whole series yet and it's been a while since I've seen any of the anime. I love the manga. I'm not sure if the events you have alluded to in here are what actually happened in the series, but either way, I really liked this one.

O, lovely one-shot! You captured all the emotion while still keeping it simple.

I've always felt bad for Yuuhi, though I was more a AyaxTouya person myself (Then again it makes sense since Chidori's my favorite female character).

If you liked the anime, you should get your hands on the manga. There's a lot more depth to it, though I liked the anime too.