Oh I loved the story within a story in this chapter! Very seductive, this pirate is!

Great chapter! Ooo the suspense! What is Peter plotting?!

Wow. Really wonderful. What beautiful writing. You’ve made Wendy a captivating character. The pace of their budding romance is perfect, in my opinion. Thank you for this delightful read. Now onto the next chapter for me!

This is perhaps one of my favorite stories I've ever read! Not only was the dialogue perfect, but it was also in character and developed a very realistic and perfectly paced plot! Your writing is magnificent and I'm so glad to have found such a wonderful story, thanks so much for writing it!

Instant favourite! It would be hard to pick out which scenes had me laughing, because there were so many. A Hook/Wendy rom-com story is a rare sight, and you have certainly set the bar! I would be delighted if one day you did write something in continuation about them, regardless of length.

This, however, has to be one of my favourite scenes of any PP fanfic:
Captain Hook leaned arrogantly in the doorway, smirking at her anger. He had a dress draped over one arm. "So sorry," he said in a way that said he was most certainly was not." But I brought you some clothes. And... it looks as though you could use them."

I was howling with laughter. HOWLING.

Lord, help me. Their banter is so adorable and amusing I'm biting my lip constantly to avoid squealing in delight. The UST is fantastic!

Incredibly cute, funny, well written, and interesting! A total favorite. Thanks so much! :)

The whole story was amazing. The plot was wonderful. Very well written! I simply adore it! Thank you so much for this!

wonderful story! bravo

Holy crap! O_O That was a stellar beginning to a very promising story! I absolutely am enthralled!

Lyn Harkeran

Absolutely fantastic fic! Only recently have I been "hooked" into the ship of Captain Hook and Wendy and am so thrilled to find such an excellent read as this. LOVED the very witty and humorous banter between the two and your story flowed very well. You developed your characters and their feelings in a nice, believable manner and their interactions were sizzling with UST and downright sexiness!
Definitely going on my fav list and will be looking for more from you.

This story is one of the best i have ever read...
I wish it would continue forever... or at least twice as long and the same amount of exciting events/episodes ;)

Its is romantic, exciting, funny, and absolutely PERFECT 3

How delightful! Love the full-circle back to Elizabeth. Nice touch.

This story is phenomenal. I loved every minute of it. (: you're a great author with a great voice.

KAY(:

Excellent story - I ended up reading the entire thing, even though I should have been grading papers and researching. I LOVED the interactions between Wendy and Hook and even Peter's character. You did keep him true to form, though I do think Wendy would have a little more sympathy for him than she showed. I do like that she is such a strong character here and is truly acting the pirate.