This is one of the best stories ever and I have a feeling at this point you may never update this but I thought you should know.

I'm sorry this stroy hasn't recieved many reviews - it definately deserves it. Wonderful writing, I can't wait for the next chapter!

I'v read this on and must say it has become my favorite "Troy" revision featuring Achilles and Paris, I love the ending line here.

Its amazing to me that Achilles, demigod among men reuses the shackles of lord liege and kings, and yet goes willingly to the bindings of love for one boy who was once nothing more than a mere shepard boy, ah how simple things would have been had he remained a shepard instead of a Prince of Troy.

Fates funny like that, eh?

Anyhow that was one of the things i liked best about this fic, how he's more than "Paris" more than just a pampered prince. He's Achilles' Alexandros.

“If not for your king, then who did you fight for?” The monarch inquired to his back.

He didn’t turn, and too soft for even the wind to catch Achilles the lion whispered his reason for all, “Alexandros.”

Shivers went down my spine, your lines are poignent and spectacular and deeply touching where they need be, i'v rarly read a fic so full of such wonderful dialouge.

hey just found yr story nice start but why did he fight for Alex did he die or something?

I really liked your story! I've come to this fandom super late as evidenced by the fact that you haven't updated it in years, lol, but I still really enjoyed it. Any recs you want to hand out of stories similar to yours would be viewed happily by me.

Wow, I really love the story! I hope you'll continue! Update soon!

oh plz update

icant wait to see whats next

gods i love achillesparis

in my opinion there are not nearly enough fics with that pairing

continue with your story its really good

i really hope they get to be together

...your writing skill is truly something to envy, you know that?

Lucky I respect more than envy

I just can't get over how you describe things. You've truly dove into the mindset, setting, time and manner of this tale and it makes it fit so much more. Your writing reminds me of old literature. The kind you learn of in English classes all the time. Great job.

'Yes, yes, yes I'll review this story! It deserves it P

a man was truly an island even while surrounded by his own."

first of all, just gotta say I loved that sentence.

Its so similar to a poem I've had to go over in my English class that said man was NOT an island (which is really bull XD) but part of a continent. So, yeah. That got my notice.

You write splendidly. The characters were done very well also. I applaud you on a very good read and style. Your descriptive skills are awesome as well.

update soon!

Please update! I just found this and it's one of the best Paris/Achilles stories I've read! :)

Great fic please update.

An idea if you want it...Why doesn't Paris come between Hactor and Achilles when they fight to try and stop them?

once again, update please.

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you say please please please review

i say please please please update

Omg! I love this story! And I feel so bad that you've hardly gotten reviews! :)

I love your story. Its very creative and original. Update soon Please! i acually have to two things to say and ask. the first is that some of the sentances (now this is probaly just me that has this problem but might as well say it)i have to read a few times to understand what your trying to say. But when i do get it, like i said before its a great story. and a question: is this story going to be more focused on Paris' sort of trials and tribulations and the things he goes through adapting to his new surroundings and his new family or is it going to based on Paris and Achilles' romance?

Like i said before fan-tabulos story and please get back to me!

Thanx~~Absolutly Redonculas