That is a lot of misspellings, wrong words, and missing words for such a short “story.”

I might just take up this challenge at a later date.

very interesting challenge

hope someone takes it up

Alas my writing skills are not up to it.

hope we get Harry / Ginny / greengrass / Katie, Ron / Hermione / Tracy Davis & Neville with Susan bones Hanna Abott and Luna Lovegood

Draco & Harry's more friendly relations start when he is dragged to cinima by his ministry imposed muggleborn wives and pumps into harry who is taking his wives to see a film

would like Sirius to servive

here's hoping

I agree with sk8erBoi!

please update! i think this is really good!

A lot of typos in the story. Aside from that, not bad, until the ending. There was no ending, it just cut off. What was Harry so upset about. There was no explanation of what these Harem laws were. How did that affect Harry? How are we, as a reader, supposed to feel sorry for him if we are not told, as part of the story, what is going on. That's like saying that Harry was upset that he had to spend the summer with the Dursleys, before we even find out who the Dursleys are. How are we supposed to empathize with him.

{Snickers}

So sad, So true... Is this going to be a multi-chapter fic? or was it only a one-shot?

interesting

You have a couple of spelling mistakes

'their' is not spelled 'there'

and 'you're' is not spelled 'your'

Please get someone to check over your work before unleashing it on the world...

cool

Your spelling is terrible. Please check the names of canon characters, i.e Voldemort (not Voldermort) before posting. I adivise you to get a beta reader. Also, please look up the differences between there, their and they're, as you seem to use 'there' throughout.

Thank you.

Interesting idea. I'd like to see you continue with this one, as well as read any that have taken up the challenge. Some minor spelling mistakes, but they can easily be ironed out.

Why should Snape be forced to make fertility potions for the Weasleys? I'd have thought that they'd be extremely fertile, going by canon experience; also I wouldn't mind Snape dying either, maybe because of the Dark Mark. You can't make many potions when you're dead, unless you're a poltergeist like Peeves.

Great Story! Would love to see a series made from it! Again great story.