Reviews for The Secret
mednin chapter 11 . 6/22/2016
Great story! Really enjoyed it! Thanks for writing this!
mednin chapter 6 . 6/22/2016
I really like the Kisara bit. I wish more fics would add her along with Jou being her possible reincarnation.
meowelina chapter 11 . 6/14/2016
Love love love the story.
amberanime chapter 4 . 3/11/2015
Kaiba is kinda sexist isn't he? I mean what does it matter if it's a girl or a boy. A person should be judged as the person he or she is. Gender should not be relevant. As a woman myself I feel insulted by Kaiba when he gets upset for picking fights with a woman. He should not be picking fights period. Joey being a girl is not a good reason to leave somebody alone. Thats like asumin girls are a weaker sex. They are not. They are males equals. Sure physically guys usualy are stronger built, but that has nothing to do with how you are or behave as a person. Kaiba is havin ishues for all the wrong reasons. Joey was treated more like a equal when Seto thought he was a guy because then he was just bein himself. With female Joey he suddenly plays by different special rules. Insulting. If I where Joey I would not have accepted his cowpoo. Having ishues with Joey lying, sure. Having ishues with having been physical with a girl despite said girl being perfectly capable of handeling herself downright offensive to girls and Joey. She is not weaker just because she is a she. As far as I am concerned, Joey should be treated exactly the same, with the exception perhaps of sometimes more romantic stuff/sexual stuff. But outside of that, no changes. It's absurd. Joey needs to be respected as she is. And Joey picks fights, and also doesn't take Kaiba's bad behavior like most do.

Next to my obivous ishues with the portrayel of gender double standards I do enjoy this fic. I just hope the upcomming chapters will not butcher Joey's tomboyness. Because being a Tomboy does not mean you secretly like to be girly. I'm a girl, and a tomboy, and hate frilly pink fluffy skirts ribbons etc. I do not pretend to be a boy though. So I hope Joey finds her confidence as a woman in this ficm withoud turning into a different person. Her behavior should remain exactly the same even after she comes out as a girl. Because personality is your own, not your body's.
MysteryMoon56 chapter 11 . 2/26/2014
That was an amazing story. The thing I enjoyed most was that joey was still in character even though he was female. Most writers completely change the character and make them complete wimps. But you did a terrific job with that, and the whole plot was amazing as well. I wish there'd been more.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 11 . 11/15/2013
Oh no Joey... Please don't do that...! I hate threesome!
And Seto is awesome by himself with you only!

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That was funny! ;D

Awww... Lol
Duke know he's in trouble..!

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Indeed they -Seto/(especially)Joey- seems out of character... But not that bad...!

That was funny!

And let Yami to became the second person (after Seto) to know Joey is a girl was Great idea! ;)

Oh Yugi reaction was all fun too!

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Nice!
Crystia chapter 6 . 2/11/2013
...They're rather...out of character...

If Joey really did 'forget' she was a girl (at times), I just...don't think she'd be able to flaunt her femininity so carelessly.

Kaiba also acts impulsively and immaturely, and I...can't see him acting that way...wahh...

They suddenly go from hating each other to dating, and a lot of their reasoning is contradictory...

But it's an interesting concept...
angel060689 chapter 11 . 12/25/2012
this story is very funny.
i like it very much.
can you write more storys like this one?
angel060689
Guest chapter 6 . 12/22/2012
I think that Kaiba's enjoying the attention the joey- i mean Joshephine is giving him.
wyegfhdfaygwer chapter 11 . 2/12/2012
Honestly the first genderbent Joey fic that I can tolerate, and by that I mean that I really, really loved it!
Usagi Squared chapter 11 . 6/16/2011
Wuaaaaahh...!

You know, I normally don't review since I always end up tongue tied about what to say, but the fact is... I want to favorite this story so so bad...

And doing that without a review just seems rude to me. Oh well.

I just LOVED this! So much! I mean... Been working on what pretty much equates to the polar opposite of this for almost a year, and just NOW I find out about this fanfic? This was amazing! Joey's own personal forgetfulness on 'his' gender for a large portion of the fanfic, the way she came out about it...

Not to mention the fact that everyone missed the 'F'. That was beautiful.

I... There's really not much I can say without sounding like a fool. There's so much I loved about this fanfic that I just... Cannot think of the right words! (Oooooh, I hate when that happens..!)

I should draw fanart. That'll make up for it. Yea...

Any ways, if you don't mind, I'm adding this to a recommendation thread now; it's really good, and it's the kind of twist that pulls me in for a read no matter what! I mean... This is probably the first time I've gone digging into Adult FF to see a missing scene..! (A missing scene that I liked by the way, that doesn't normally happen.)

I should cut this short now... So I'll say again; wonderful work! I'll likely PM you a picture for it sometime~
WinterValentine chapter 11 . 6/15/2011
this fanfic really made me laugh. i wished you didnt end so soon. i feel as if there is this gap in the story. so yahh.
edwardsgirl16 chapter 11 . 8/8/2010
I loved this story! It's one of the few ones where Joey's a girl that is written well. The only part I missed was the lemon because I really wanted to see that. :( Anyway, amazing story.
cola50 chapter 11 . 5/23/2010
lol oh i loved this story it was funny. lol dang i wish mine were like that. good job.
ahsie chapter 11 . 1/28/2008
and it ends?

no~ i was just getting used to the idea of joey being a girl~

lols~

nice one, thou the ending seemed somewhat rushed?

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