Hey, i hope you keep updating this story i'm totally into it. You've really got a good plot line happening and the writing quality is actually pretty gud. hope to see more of this. keep up the good work.

I can see why you think this one is fun. Fantastic! :D

Ah, good to see another chapter from one of my favorite FF:TSW authors. Yes, Aki is in quite a nightmare, yes? I really like the ongoing tension here.

And poor Neil! :(

Sad. Interesting, but sad. But intreguing.

Or... something along those lines.

This is a twist, and something that I wouldn't have thought of before. I like it! Oh, and that line from Hein's little explanation: "All that’s left of who you were is a collection of organs..."

Ew...

This is going really good I like this chapter.

Finally getting around to reading it all at once, the best my tattered mind can come up with at the moment is the following:

*Clears her throat* Ahem,

"NEAT!"

That was the most surreal FFTSW fic I've ever read... Got me real curious! So Aki isn't human or something? Please continue!

Alright, something from one of my favorite FF:TSW authors! Great intro to a new story, good to see some activity in here. Everytime I visited lately, I swore I heard crickets... _

Great chapter. I like it.