Very well - written. Whose POV is this?
I would suggest a final draft or edit, though.

WOW. Just wow.

Numero Uno: Who is talking here? I'm not really clear on who's the narrator for this story.

Numero Dos: I've been reading and talking about human nature and the corruption of the soul in my lit class. I never thought that I'd see them brought forth so accurately in a fanfic. I commend you whole-heartily for accomplishing a task of such magnitude ;)

strange, morbid, fascinating and sad

This was interesting. I can see how it is a bit detached, the paragraphs skipping around with different emotions and feelings in each. However, I still really enjoyed this. It was deep, and the emotion and brokenness that is present makes it eerily beautiful. Good job.

Wow...awesome...

that's really good, though it is somewhat disturbing.

As Palpatine said, Evil is only a matter of POV...man this is good! It made me pretty much understand his motives, and realize how he could actually have done the things he did to the people he used to love. Great fic.

Good.

Wow. I feel like I have literally just been pushed out of Vader's mind and had the door slammed in my face. You truly captured his blind anger and his bleak outlook on his new life, something few people can do. In fact, this is the first story I've read to do such a thing. Even my Vader-fic, "Despair," makes him sympathetic and soppy by comparison. Brilliant, short, and very well-executed. I would say I pity the man, but I'm too afraid to do so. :) This is definitely one for my favorites!

Eep. I know the feeling.

Very well written! I truly enjoyed the psychological implications when you descended into this broken mind. It takes courage to speak about such a controversial subject, such as madness, power lust, obsession, but I believe that you have succeeded in writing a very credible take on these feelings. Keep up the good work!

Oh my. Having just come from yet another screening of Revenge, I think this expertly explains the madness Anakin has sunk himself into.

Powerful. I liked this very much. I liked how you got into Anakin's mind and showed how the very thing that everyone was feeling for him was actually what was pushing him further away. It's a fascinating idea and I'm glad that you wrote this well.

The dark trend of thought makes me cringe but there's courage in allowing yourself that 'descent' to darkness. A good exploration and I feel as though the author spilled herself/himself unto the work. Keep writing!