You are amazing, really. I swear that this story moved me a lot. You created a wonderful Wyatt: bad, funny, loving, rebellious, moody. He was so palpable that I almost see him, I felt he was very real. In Chris's case it was also phenomenal because although we know his personality in the series, here in this story we go deeper into him, we understand his dilemma and his suffering. And all the decisions he made, took us to the end that we all know and you gave him that masterly touch.

The epilogue was my favorite, I swear that seeing Wyatt shattered by what I knew was going to happen to his brother made me feel bad. I cried with him and laughed with him. When I read it it was two o'clock in the morning and I almost burst into tears on the keyboard, happy and sad because it was a very bittersweet ending. The way I change the future was very bold.

I am happy for this story, it is my favorite. And now I wanted to ask you permission to translate it into Spanish. I do not know if there is an official translation but if no one has translated it, I would like to have the honor of doing so. I wait your answer.

Chris was born on November 16, 2004.
I know a lot of fics has him being born a month early, but even assuming that's canon, he would have been conceived in March of 2004, not in 2003.
And if he was full term, it would have been February of '04.
So I really don't see how you come up with a 2003 conception date.

l didn't like the idea in the beginning but to the end I enjoyed this great story and writing a lot!

I CRIED SO HARD BEAUTIFUL STORY!

HEY WHADDUP I’M READING THIS EXACTLY IN 2018!

I love this ending. I always wondered what happened to his body and if maybe the two of them kept their memories of the alternate future.

So touching in the end! Though I don’t want Chris to die but u made it so sad touching and finally happy ending. Just wish that u also wrote that they remember all

Thanks for sharing.

I'd definitely read this in a library or bookstore. The writing style was great-you had relatively few grammar, etc. errors and the way that you set the story was easy to follow and imagine. You used descriptive language but not too much and your conclusion was realistic despite partly being incredibly sad. Overall I'd give this story a 5 out of 5 stars, and I love that I can do that because this is only the second time I have been able to give a story that rating since I began reading and reviewing on F . Great job!

gah it pissed me off so much when Gideon erased his memory and Chris got the sisters to block Wyatt from coming back from the future but genres hoping Gideon at least gets his butt kicked. I was hoping you would let them rule together. nobody writes it that way and I think it sucks because Wyatt is right: brothers belong on the same side regardless whether its good evil or neither one, they belong on the same side.

what about Paige? It says "What are we gonna do Wy? First mom, then Aunt Phoebe, and now Grandpa. We're all alone now..." Was she already dead before or something?

if Chris was conceived in 2003, but the storys present is 2004, then now do they still have a day left to get him conceived?

Great story, thank you for sharing and I hope you did find the courage to try and get your work published

merci

I was fascinated by your fic, many congratulations. Really beautiful.