Nicely done. Are you considering a companion piece at all?

Poor Piper. I can completely understand how Paige would feel free of it all. Well done with having Paige feel guilty/torn over it. Not much from Phoebe's perspective though.

Great fic :)

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Hello! I liked this story, though I did not understand the ending. Why did you go back to the first episode?

Other than that, I thougth it wrapped things up wonderfully, and I'm adding it to my faves. I did think when I watched the fnale last week (it came late) that it was a very irritating sort of ending. I did not like the last glimpse of the Charmed sisters to be of those women, LOL!

Congratulations on a job well done!

Wow. This story is amazing and very true to the characters. I love the bit at the end too. Nice way to wrap everything up seeing as if that was going to be the last episode there were some questions about Victor and the boys and Paige's whitelighter stuff lingering.

an interesting take on the aftermath of the finale. You showed great emotion in this story as to how all of the sisters felt. great job and please keep writing.

Tragic and full of bullsht! Not even the Elders could keep Piper from her boys. It was a foolish idea to fake their deaths without bodies for the cops to find. They will be found and they will never be safe. They are fools because they ran.

wow that was really good. Please update again soon!

Nicely done. I like how you detail the emotional fallout for each character. They all seem dead on. I look forward to more chapters. Great job.

hey more chapters please I can't wait to read your new chapter soon.

wow...really makes you wonder what next season will be like...great job!