I LOVED IT EVEN THOUGH IT WAS SO SHORT I REALLY LOVED IT.. YOU SHOULD DO MORE STORIES ABOUT THEM WITH LEMONS AND STUFF.. ONE MY MY FAVORITES BY FAR!

Haha. Not lame enough apparently...

Nice job! I liked it.

it was a really good story. plz update the story I want to know what is going to happen next.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This was a very good story. I liked it... :)

I liked this story i think it was good it would be cool if u made it into a full-lenght story!

shut up it's not lame...i like this story...good job

that was a really really good story... i hope there are more 4 am writing sprees... it was really good

You should be more confident in your writing! If I hadn't read your author notes, I would have thought you were. I thought this was very very good! Lemon and all. It didn't go so fast, to the point you don't get the story, as some one-sots I read.

Very good job-

I liked it. I thought the insults part at the beginnig was hillarious! This was good. Write more!