Really enjoyed this! It was interesting to read “Mutually Beneficial” first, then backtrack to this earlier story.

You were already an excellent storyteller. It’s really encouraging to see how your writing continued to mature between the two stories. It gives me hope for myself.

Fantastic!

Great story! I laughed out loud when one of your early Author’s Notes said, “From here the story goes a little AU.” Nothing wrong with AU. All of my stories are AU.
Good read, good characterizations. Well done. Have a good day or night, depending on when you read this.

A good story. It was strongest and most interesting when it concerned Sabe and her point of view. Or ObiWan's where it diverged from the original tale. I teared up when Sabe dies and loses her daughter and also when Obi-Wan says his last goodbye. So, well done.

"Im just a simple man, trying to make my way in the universe."

One of the cooler lines from Star Wars.

If Yoda is as old as he claims to be then he probably has 'seen it all' multiple times and so can tell which way things will go from experience.

What species were the original Jedi? Definitely not humans.

No ulterior motives? At all? Nice story so far. One always wonders. What were those people thinking?

I no like ouch time

A very sweet chapter. I really like it! :3

Wow. I'm stunned. I never really liked young Obi-wan too much on the screen, but I was so drawn to your portrayal of him! I love this story so much! Sabewan lives!

It got so sad towards the end! poor obi wan.. he had to endure so much.
awesome story! 3

Hi! I realise that this story was started and finished a while ago, but I only recently found it and I have to say it is amazing. Really, genuinely, amazing. It has everything a story needs all wrapped up perfectly and I won't deny that I completely binged it over the past 2 days! These last few chapters seriously made me so emotional (I'm still sniffling as I write this, it's a huge mess) and everything was so well-written...ahh! I can't even explain how great it was to read this, thank you so much for sharing your work, you're awesome and I hope life is treating you well! :D

I know this story has been completed for a while now, but I could read this over and over again. It's a story I enjoyed so much. So thank you for writing it.

Finished this last night. I absolutely love it!
For a fictional universe that is so vast and very complicated, you had the guts to write your story and the talent to back it up. Fair Maiden, Shining Knight fits into the Star Wars universe with flawless ease while still capturing a reader's heart. Thank you so much for sharing. I enjoyed reading your work and will check out what else you wrote.

Sounds good to me. I remember how angry I was about Padme's sudden death from a broken heart when I walked out of the theater. Lost the will to live, what a joke.
Btw I've been reading this in between living life the past few days. I love it! I can't wait to see how and where it ends! Thanks for sharing!