starts ok, i look forward to seeing how it goes.

Huzzah for Arty and all things action/adventure! Nice to see someone still writes in the genre. :) It all seems very exciting and suspenseful, if a little cliche - nevertheless, if you like, continue soon!

Whoa, why haven't you updated this obvious master-piece in motion. It's really seldom that I find an Artemis Fowl fic that catches my attention, but I've never found one that took my breath away, this fic already promises to be a work of excellence and it would be wrong to give it up, you really should continue, and you definitely should have more reviews, keep up the excellent work, I look foreword to the update, because you've definitely got me hooked, I love your writing style.

P.S Is this going to be A/H? Just curious, I'll probably read it even if it's not, (and usually I'm a hard core Artemis Holly fan) I'm really curious about this story.

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UGH! i HATE CHERRIES! Well...any how...plz update soon...this looks like its going somewhwere...good...:)

i never expected to find this. i like it though. your a good writer and this fic has a lot of potential. i love alternate settings, this is very creative. keep updating, i:d hate to see such a good idea go to waste.

Ooh, interesting. This definitely has potential... Interesting story idea; I've never read(is it a book? :S) Diablo II, but this has a Garth Nix Old Kingdom Trilogy feel. The writing is superb as it was in your other AF fic. Update soon, please! I'll be holding my breath for the next chapter!

stunning... though i think it's already been proven that you're an exceptional writer... please update!

Hi! I tried to review before but the connection went wrong. Typical.

Well, this sounds very promising. When I finally get over my laziness and log in, I'll add you to my Favorite Author's list. Hopefully you'll exert a lot of effort into keeping yourself there. :D

seems realy good please update