This is very good, I had to read it through several times to sort it all out. Really makes you concentrate on what you're reading.

Great story i got every single part of it it was amazing i loved every part of it i hope you continue in this i would like to read more lol your writting techniqe it was magical. so please think about writting some more to this it was... it was... i can't fine the words to it lol speechless great job.

CloudsLover

Good first effort. First-person perspective is rare in Daria fanfic, and always nice to see, especially when used to really dig into the motivations and inner thoughts of the characters, like here. I would like to see a second part, maybe exploring Trent's reaction to losing Jane, or Kevin's reaction to losing Brittany (if you can kill off enough of your own brain cells to get it right).

Very good story there, well written, with some interesting points of view (I really like the Four Seasons; I wish you could prvide examples for Spring and Summer). Giving Andrew a voice must be a first in Daria fanfiction.

The only thing that needs correction (apart from a very few typos) is the presentation. You go from Tom's part to Andrew's without transition, and I at first didn't notice right away that the character had changed!

I'll be looking for future works from you.

Excellent, excellent, excellent. I hope that you'll continue to write, your work is very good. I'll put up a link at .com and hopefully, more Daria fans will read this and leave reviews. - CINCGREEN