Laguna x Seifer? x_X Omai, but, whatever floats your boat. Was pretty good, so far, from what I've read.

I'm afraid I have nothing postivie to say about this fic. i'm still blinking at the appaling slaughter of Seifer's character. I don't quite understand why you made him a giggling loon. I also fail to understand the reason for the pairing (although I do feel it is a plausible pairing) and unfortunately there is no sign of any plot either. Okay, granted, plots aren't always a necessity, a drabble is often a fantastic way to write, but this whole piece makes very little sense to me.

I can offer you some advice though, not to sound like a pompous cow, i'm just spreading my pearls. Next time try to give the characters some motivation, i'd like to know a little about how Seifer and Laguna came about, it would certainly make an interesting read, and please, play the game through again, read more fics, just to keep your characters IN character. I would also advise refraining from making first person point of view from sounding just like your own thoughts, but don't forget, this is only my humble opinion. I'm sure there are others who find this fic just peachy.

i like the story... Please Keep it up! Cant wait for the nexzt chapter!

Cute, Chickie.

LOL strangley enough, i thought no one else would right a SeiferxLaguna either (although, technically... well my Zell Becomes Popular fanfics weird anyway ;)

:D Your fanfics really gos so far- please, write some more!

hiya!...well...this is new the firs Laguna X Seifer fic i ever read_ jajaja Laguna likes TV too much_ update soon_~

hee hee. That was cute! Write more, I love it!